Hey, I hope this question doesn’t come across the wrong way, but I wanted to ask if this book includes or in any way fetishizes incest? I have some personal trauma related to that topic, and while I understand that’s not your responsibility, I’d really appreciate a warning before I continue reading. There’s a scene between Therium and the cloaked demon on Alvy’s route where the demon says, “Does he also let his father deflower him in this one?” and Therium replies, “Not here, he wants to be faithful for once.” That exchange made me a bit uneasy. It almost sounded like it might be implying something like a father taking their son's virginity. Also, the line “Not here, he wants to be faithful for once,” gives the impression that the son had a choice and said yes. Please don’t take offense if I’ve misunderstood the conversation or phrased this poorly. I struggle a lot in social interactions, and I really don’t mean any disrespect. I’m not trying to shame/judge the story or you as the author. I just wanted to ask for clarification or a potential content warning before I keep on reading. For what it’s worth, I genuinely love this story so far. The characters have so much personality, and the world feels both grand but digestible. That one moment just caught me off guard, and it’s been difficult for me to move past it without understanding the intent behind it.
Those lines refer to the main character having sex with the love interest's step father. But also, you should not have started Therium's route before reading the three before him. ^^"
I just finished all the routes and I loved it! there are so many funny moments that made me laugh especially between Cody and scribbles ! And the sexy scenes are amazing! Plus the artwork is stunning I cant wait to see what MOF draws next! But damn did the mystery and ending in alvy/therium leave my speechless! There are so many crumbs MOF left that leaves me so hungry to find out what's going on I'm drooling for the next update! I love all the guys so far but so far aiden is my fave! I cant wait to see what happens with him next!
I was with the belief that we're having a seven deadly representative (Headmaster Pride, Cody Lust, Therium Envy). And thought that Alvy was Greed, still believe it was Greed. But his backstory, the wall paper have goat head which often associated with Lust, what does that mean Minoffur ;-;.
Anyway, SCRIPPLE IS NOT DEMON OF LUST!! HE'S PRIDE!!! He's the Demon sin of Pride in the world of Lust (the energy of the world revolves around Lust).
Brother… I wanted to enjoy the developing love between MC and Alvy to the fullest, so I saved Alvy’s route for almost THREE WEEKS so that I could play it by the fire on my ass when I didn’t have any coursework to worry about in the back of my mind. All my self-control, all my patience, and you give me… this? That ending?
My crashout measured 9 on the Richter scale, and proceeded to annihilate all life forms in a seventeen mile vicinity.
They did fuck in peace and later rest in peace. They're free to fuck each other brain out before dying in their sleep. That's very peaceful. It's just the reset of progress that just makes one wanna scream "FUCK!"
Hello, I don't have any problems or questions except one: can you tell me how to get this scene with Aiden? I've tried everything, or is this scene unavailable? Could you tell me the route?
So are Therium and Alvy routes in the Scribbles storyline just fake routes? They are just the pre-requisites for unlocking the real Scribbles route, right? Does this mean that there won't be any follow-up for the Alvy route in the second chapter or any subsequent chapters (if there are any)? If so, I'm really sad. Alvy has already become my second favorite character (the first being Dallan). Crying for the cute puppy. But no matter what, I can't wait to see the subsequent plot.
Although I do feel like I got spoiled on aspects of the other routes. Thoughts on adding a lock on the Summoner path that opens once the other three paths are completed? Or maybe just a warning message recommending it to be the last route players should do.
Because if Cody is still alive, then how? Because I know that we know what happened to Cody at the end of Alvy's day three, and I don't know how (When Cody is still alive) then how did he survived
No, Alvy was under Cody, and the knife was just long enough to catch Cody, so Alvy is alive, but damn... Poor Alvy, he found his true love, and then his true love died
Huh? But there's another picture where Cody is on top of Alvy, Are there two different endings? And if so, who survives in Chapter 2? And if they survive, how do they survive?
They fucked several time with Cody on top at first. But the last round of sex were Alvy topping. Time reverted the moment Cody died at least when associated with Therium.
Alvy supposedly survive because the requirements were Cody dying, but dues to the Cat Teacher's mistake. Alvy died too.
I swear to all that is furry!!!!! what a amazing chapter so many emotions and absolutely diabolical cliff hanger.... where's chapter two ill be frothing at the mouth if i dont get to continue alvy and dillon im so hooked
Version 2.0 WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved this last part and I'm excited for the next update. One question: Regarding the comments below, I saw that in a comment from the creator he says that he doesn't use time loops, so how the hell were these two routes of Álvy and Therium possible? If there is no loop, then it was all just a giant mind control? Bonus question: In this story there are some fourth wall breaks that occur mainly during the credits with the characters, and it's pretty obvious that the concept of putting the game in the narrative won't happen, but I still have to ask, if they know that our world is a separate universe from theirs, then when we switch between all the routes in the game, do we manipulate the time flow? Or is each route in the game a different timeline? By the way, everyone who reads this comment had a great life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry for the lack of translation
Hi, I saw you replied to my comment, thanks for your interest. And since we're here, do you have any interesting theories? Because I'm pretty sure we'll be part of the villain group in this fourth route.
I keep reading these vns for some dumb romance only to get way too attached to the characters... If I can't marry Alvy and live happily ever after once the story is complete, I'm gonna suplex someone into Tate's hole.
I’m sobbing wtf was that ending T-T alvy deserves more love 😭. Also i can’t seem to find the music when alvy and cody were crying together under the tree i wanna listen to it on repeat (plz helps me find it )
Fr also while im eager for scribbles im starting to worry that he's evil. Like cody's been through enough atp just please. I suspect scribbles route will feature a lot more angst than the others
WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Eu amei essa última parte e to animadão pra próxima atualização. Uma pergunta: Em quanto aos comentários abaixo vi que em um comentário do criador fala que ele não usa Loops temporais , então como diabos essas duas rotas do Álvy e do Therium eram possíveis? Se não tem loop então tudo só era um controle mental gigante? Pergunta bônus: Nessa história a algumas quebras de quarta parede que ocorrem principalmente durante os créditos com os personagens, e bem óbvio que o conceito de colocar o jogando na narrativa não vai acontecer, mas ainda sim eu tenho que pergunta, se eles sabem que o nosso mundo é um universo separado então do deles então, quando nós alteramos entre todas as rotas do jogo nos estamos manipulado o fluxo temporal ? Ou cada rota existente no jogo é uma linha do tempo diferente? Aliás que todos que lerem esse comentário tenham uma ótima vida!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have no clue how those routes happen provided that it's not a time loop. I've spent a lot of time trying to figure it out but have come back without an answer. Also, I assume that each path is a different timeline, as that makes the most sense and I haven't seen anything that shows otherwise.
hey, so uhm is this one of those vns where when they say whatever name you put in for the mc isnt real then it says your actual name? i have seen that in a fe good vns but this one did it (i think it was either in theriums route or early alvys route) either way, it freaked me out a bit more than others have lol
also, whats this about this cody character im seeing in the comments?
Doing Alvy’s route, and Cody says his phone is dead, but… his whole thing was that he’s only good for charging phones. Also, the mention OSHA makes me so confused. Is this the US, or a completely different world?
That leaves me with more questions. Spells, and innate abilities (the unique abilities the cast possess) use energy. Then what uses magic? Am I understanding this right?
Also, Cody’s sandwiches in Tate’s route. Where did they go in the other ones? 🙂
No, spells use magic, if someone says they're out of energy that just means they're tired, except for Cody, who's energy is an actual source of power. Cody's sandwiches go bad in every route and he will only realize that once the smell of rotting food gets to him.
If I choose Alvy, will we definitely not have a future? Please let him survive in the second chapter, even if I can't be with him, please don't let him become a victim of the conspiracy.
oh……thanks. The final scene of Alvy's third day, where his teacher assassinated the two of them, made me misunderstand. But from your responses to others, does Alvy's route not continue?
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Could anyone tell me how to unlock these images, please?
Hey, I hope this question doesn’t come across the wrong way, but I wanted to ask if this book includes or in any way fetishizes incest? I have some personal trauma related to that topic, and while I understand that’s not your responsibility, I’d really appreciate a warning before I continue reading. There’s a scene between Therium and the cloaked demon on Alvy’s route where the demon says, “Does he also let his father deflower him in this one?” and Therium replies, “Not here, he wants to be faithful for once.” That exchange made me a bit uneasy. It almost sounded like it might be implying something like a father taking their son's virginity. Also, the line “Not here, he wants to be faithful for once,” gives the impression that the son had a choice and said yes. Please don’t take offense if I’ve misunderstood the conversation or phrased this poorly. I struggle a lot in social interactions, and I really don’t mean any disrespect. I’m not trying to shame/judge the story or you as the author. I just wanted to ask for clarification or a potential content warning before I keep on reading. For what it’s worth, I genuinely love this story so far. The characters have so much personality, and the world feels both grand but digestible. That one moment just caught me off guard, and it’s been difficult for me to move past it without understanding the intent behind it.
Those lines refer to the main character having sex with the love interest's step father.
But also, you should not have started Therium's route before reading the three before him. ^^"
Every time i see his face i get ptsd flashbacks what happened to mah poor boi
How dare thy give me furry vn ptsd :*(
Same
Is there any way to play older versions of the game?
Reposting this link so I don't have to scroll down super far just to find it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1y77iHSSRPdKMRZoVaW6oYRPUd0yR-FkqxBhYunoNPv0/...
I just finished all the routes and I loved it! there are so many funny moments that made me laugh especially between Cody and scribbles ! And the sexy scenes are amazing! Plus the artwork is stunning I cant wait to see what MOF draws next! But damn did the mystery and ending in alvy/therium leave my speechless! There are so many crumbs MOF left that leaves me so hungry to find out what's going on I'm drooling for the next update! I love all the guys so far but so far aiden is my fave! I cant wait to see what happens with him next!
MOF You have successfully ripped out my heart and torn it to shreds in front of me, I hope you're happy with yourself
Im glad Im not the only one who feels this way like wtf was that T.T
I was with the belief that we're having a seven deadly representative (Headmaster Pride, Cody Lust, Therium Envy). And thought that Alvy was Greed, still believe it was Greed. But his backstory, the wall paper have goat head which often associated with Lust, what does that mean Minoffur ;-;.
Anyway, SCRIPPLE IS NOT DEMON OF LUST!! HE'S PRIDE!!! He's the Demon sin of Pride in the world of Lust (the energy of the world revolves around Lust).
30 mins in and I've already had multiple laughing fits holy shit-
Man I hope this thing doesn't turn into some angst-heavy tragedy or something, haha... (genuinely don't know what's in store >.>)
Hey so maybe I shouldn't have gone off the beaten path for my first route >.>
Alfy, my boy...
I don't know if i even have the motivation to go after the others after that ToT
Brother… I wanted to enjoy the developing love between MC and Alvy to the fullest, so I saved Alvy’s route for almost THREE WEEKS so that I could play it by the fire on my ass when I didn’t have any coursework to worry about in the back of my mind. All my self-control, all my patience, and you give me… this? That ending?
My crashout measured 9 on the Richter scale, and proceeded to annihilate all life forms in a seventeen mile vicinity.
Then you'll LOVE the next update
Sarcasm?
CAN WE DATE THE DEMON?!
yes
WHAT?! HOW respectfully :3
Not currently implemented yet, I believe. But maybe in a few months...
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Couldn't just let them fuck in peace 🥀
but I did let them rest in peace
Evil...
Evil, don't flatter MOF like that
I’d say rest in peace, but they already seemed pretty rested.
They reached heaven early, in more ways than one.
They did fuck in peace and later rest in peace. They're free to fuck each other brain out before dying in their sleep. That's very peaceful. It's just the reset of progress that just makes one wanna scream "FUCK!"
That all that had happened didn't matter.
Will we be able to summon Scribbles on the next update of his route or in chapter two?
Hello, I don't have any problems or questions except one: can you tell me how to get this scene with Aiden? I've tried everything, or is this scene unavailable? Could you tell me the route?
So are Therium and Alvy routes in the Scribbles storyline just fake routes? They are just the pre-requisites for unlocking the real Scribbles route, right? Does this mean that there won't be any follow-up for the Alvy route in the second chapter or any subsequent chapters (if there are any)? If so, I'm really sad. Alvy has already become my second favorite character (the first being Dallan). Crying for the cute puppy. But no matter what, I can't wait to see the subsequent plot.
I think in the future you may be able to choose the crossed option again (since you can click it anyways) and it would appear a new choice?
Or they would just appear again in the chapter 2?
I really want a Therium route continuation too </3
I hope so
Tsundere demon is so PEAK.
Although I do feel like I got spoiled on aspects of the other routes. Thoughts on adding a lock on the Summoner path that opens once the other three paths are completed? Or maybe just a warning message recommending it to be the last route players should do.
Because if Cody is still alive, then how? Because I know that we know what happened to Cody at the end of Alvy's day three, and I don't know how (When Cody is still alive) then how did he survived
He...didn't? He died and timeline got reverted back. Once in Therium's route, then Alvy route in which both of them for stabbed.
(Teacher stab Cody but accidentally stabs Alvy first and was confused as why the timeline continues, then stab Cody and it's reverted back.)
No, Alvy was under Cody, and the knife was just long enough to catch Cody, so Alvy is alive, but damn... Poor Alvy, he found his true love, and then his true love died
Huh? But there's another picture where Cody is on top of Alvy, Are there two different endings? And if so, who survives in Chapter 2? And if they survive, how do they survive?
you're hallucinating *pat pat*
They fucked several time with Cody on top at first. But the last round of sex were Alvy topping. Time reverted the moment Cody died at least when associated with Therium.
Alvy supposedly survive because the requirements were Cody dying, but dues to the Cat Teacher's mistake. Alvy died too.
Is Cody still there at chapter two? Because I finished Alvy's route yesterday, and I know that Alvy is still alive, but Cody?
A bug was found in the Android release, let me know if any other information is needed.
Thank you for the fantastic story. I want to follow more, and have more pleasures too, please~
I think the second to last nsfw Dallan cg is still bugged. Someone posted it here so I know I should have it unlocked, but it still won't unlock.
I have a quick question As it says Chapter 1 Does that mean there will be more chapters and continuation to the game?
Like how many chapters are you thinking of making?
Well, we know there would be a chapter 2, and if I'm no mistaked, the first route of the chapter 2 would be the Aiden's one.
About "how many chapters are", I think MOF don't say that for now
i want more tate
So, this is random but...luis route? Eh? Eh?
Eh...
whatttt hes cute
And hot, (I'm so sorry Alvy)
we love alvy too! The only one on this route so far who actually deserves love it seems
I agree i need more cyberpunk goat man :3
Are we… Ever gonna get a… Polygamous route ? Of course I’m asking for a friend.
Pls?
I swear to all that is furry!!!!! what a amazing chapter so many emotions and absolutely diabolical cliff hanger.... where's chapter two ill be frothing at the mouth if i dont get to continue alvy and dillon im so hooked
Version 2.0 WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved this last part and I'm excited for the next update. One question: Regarding the comments below, I saw that in a comment from the creator he says that he doesn't use time loops, so how the hell were these two routes of Álvy and Therium possible? If there is no loop, then it was all just a giant mind control? Bonus question: In this story there are some fourth wall breaks that occur mainly during the credits with the characters, and it's pretty obvious that the concept of putting the game in the narrative won't happen, but I still have to ask, if they know that our world is a separate universe from theirs, then when we switch between all the routes in the game, do we manipulate the time flow? Or is each route in the game a different timeline? By the way, everyone who reads this comment had a great life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry for the lack of translation
Pretty great theory right there
Hi, I saw you replied to my comment, thanks for your interest. And since we're here, do you have any interesting theories? Because I'm pretty sure we'll be part of the villain group in this fourth route.
I keep reading these vns for some dumb romance only to get way too attached to the characters... If I can't marry Alvy and live happily ever after once the story is complete, I'm gonna suplex someone into Tate's hole.
I’m sobbing wtf was that ending T-T alvy deserves more love 😭. Also i can’t seem to find the music when alvy and cody were crying together under the tree i wanna listen to it on repeat (plz helps me find it )
we need more alvyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Fr also while im eager for scribbles im starting to worry that he's evil. Like cody's been through enough atp just please. I suspect scribbles route will feature a lot more angst than the others
WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Eu amei essa última parte e to animadão pra próxima atualização. Uma pergunta: Em quanto aos comentários abaixo vi que em um comentário do criador fala que ele não usa Loops temporais , então como diabos essas duas rotas do Álvy e do Therium eram possíveis? Se não tem loop então tudo só era um controle mental gigante? Pergunta bônus: Nessa história a algumas quebras de quarta parede que ocorrem principalmente durante os créditos com os personagens, e bem óbvio que o conceito de colocar o jogando na narrativa não vai acontecer, mas ainda sim eu tenho que pergunta, se eles sabem que o nosso mundo é um universo separado então do deles então, quando nós alteramos entre todas as rotas do jogo nos estamos manipulado o fluxo temporal ? Ou cada rota existente no jogo é uma linha do tempo diferente? Aliás que todos que lerem esse comentário tenham uma ótima vida!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have no clue how those routes happen provided that it's not a time loop. I've spent a lot of time trying to figure it out but have come back without an answer. Also, I assume that each path is a different timeline, as that makes the most sense and I haven't seen anything that shows otherwise.
Well... It's implied Therium can see the future, more like all futures at once
Maybe he gave you that ability temporally?
Like insight, if it feels as long as this then no wonder he's gone a little mad
hey, so uhm is this one of those vns where when they say whatever name you put in for the mc isnt real then it says your actual name? i have seen that in a fe good vns but this one did it (i think it was either in theriums route or early alvys route) either way, it freaked me out a bit more than others have lol
also, whats this about this cody character im seeing in the comments?
That's Undertale
never played the game so im all kinds of confused now... then again, im very sleep deprived so yeah
Doing Alvy’s route, and Cody says his phone is dead, but… his whole thing was that he’s only good for charging phones. Also, the mention OSHA makes me so confused. Is this the US, or a completely different world?
Cody uses energy for his... well, energy manipulation, not magic, which are different things, and he was kind of out of energy.
I should really explain how the magic system actually works but I've been putting it off for Scribbles' route, which is next update
That leaves me with more questions. Spells, and innate abilities (the unique abilities the cast possess) use energy. Then what uses magic? Am I understanding this right?
Also, Cody’s sandwiches in Tate’s route. Where did they go in the other ones? 🙂
No, spells use magic, if someone says they're out of energy that just means they're tired, except for Cody, who's energy is an actual source of power.
Cody's sandwiches go bad in every route and he will only realize that once the smell of rotting food gets to him.
But Tate gets tired too from using his teleportation. Does that mean he has energy manipulation too but it’s just highly specialised?
using your magic too much also gets you tired just like physical activity
Will we get more Alvy in the future?
Please don't tell me that's all we get😭
If I choose Alvy, will we definitely not have a future? Please let him survive in the second chapter, even if I can't be with him, please don't let him become a victim of the conspiracy.
He's not dead
oh……thanks. The final scene of Alvy's third day, where his teacher assassinated the two of them, made me misunderstand. But from your responses to others, does Alvy's route not continue?
Miss Aiden so much, hope can see him again soon <3
Is it just me or does it feel like Alvy is the true route? Not that I didn't like other routes but his just feels perfect
It's because Alvy's route actually has an ending, compared to the others who will continue in chapter 2.
Does that mean Alvy's route will be a lot shorter than the others?
It means Alvy's route ends there, where they we're killed.
I'll never forgive therium for itReal asf i originaly liked therium *cough cough*
horse cock*cough cough* but this ruined him 4 meethe end of the Alvy update is too fair why killed you cruel
OH MY GOD, I didn't expect that ending but did see it coming
I would be very sad if I couldn't be with Alvy in Chapter 2