I enjoyed the first build quite a bit! I can't wait for what you have next in store (that meaning next chapters/routes).
You've got a great main characters' dynamics and the story is enjoyable as well! I've found some spelling mistakes, but it wasn't anything severe that made me lose the sense of the sentence.
This VN is absolutely amazing! It has a perfect balance of humor, wholesomeness and horni. I'd even say that this might be one of my 3 favorite VNs of all time that share the same #1 spot. i can't wait to see how this game will go in the future and i hope there won't be any problems in development. I also have a few questions:
1) What is the current update schedule? Every few weeks, a month or multiple months?
2) Will there be TBS fighting mechanics while in a battle against the nigthfallen?
3) Who is the next character in line to get a path? I hope it's Tate hehe ;3
hi there, being in top 3 in someone's list is always great ^^
As for your questions:
1. I'm working on this vn alone so it really depends on how fast I compose the script and make the art, but it should receive an update at least once every 2-3 months as long as the support continues here or on Patreon.
2. Not very likely, it's not a bad idea, and if it turns out to be easier to make than it seems, then maybe, and I mean a BIG maybe.
3. I can't say who will be next, but on my Patreon there is a poll that ends in a couple of days to vote on the next path, if you want to give Tate a better chance, consider voting there ;)
your game is awesome, humor, emotion and characters with a really nice personality (and design) I loved it and I'm really in a hurry to find my little tiger ❤
The art style is very fitting, while its desirable to let he player input a name, I like there to also be a default name to fallback on, we get to have a full but incomplete view of the MC, that makes me VERY happy! Now I know exactly what to envision the MC looking like! Not just a feline, but a Snep! Yay! Any feline would do fur me, but Snep is new! ^^ oh! Would love to see that 2 months ago photo or well the "true" looks, not sure which, heh ^^;,
He doesn't like fish??? Blasphemy!!! XD
Metajokes! XD and a beautiful compromise! In just the fashion I like it!
WWoof!
That was killer, mood, introduction, but priceless! Just how I like it! ^^
Pfff! hahaha too bad the CG is only Chibi, but its also perfect like it to! XD One idea is if you ever make a non chibi version, can show both!
Is this end of meet choice for rest of VN or just CH1? I feel its too soon to lock in a route, we have only just met them. We have a good gasp by now of some of their personalities and quirks, but what we know is still all superficial. I would rather have the chance to know more about each of them, an example or taste of what they have to offer, like some of their simple hopes, dreams, thoughts, etc. Once locked in then delve into more deep and personal ones.
Either way that a cleaver meta redirect! I'll come back for you handsome! I got another one to chase! Oh and will Shard choice and Relationship Route be independent? Would allow for some more flexibility, would only need slight edits and a few bigger ones compared to a pure combo.
Yeah that feels really wrong, to have it stated that the choice was made long ago, predetermined, thus set in stone against ANY forces, yet the player gets to choose it based on a arbitrary choice of crush, before even getting to know ANY of them better? It doesn't compute properly. It is cute, but this seems way too rushed as hell!!!
Ung... family name too? This really ought to be done for us, as it stands to be much winder ranged and open than a first name...
Oh wow that was an excellent choice of song!
I would like to know what that new kitty looks like!
That ending wow! I'd ask more questions but here is not the place, for major spoiler.
Damn.. once again I'm going to have to choose between them! D:, I want them all!... so I guess multiple save files then? hehehe...
Big issue though to keep mention Humans and Humanity when none of the characters are even Human, let alone all Human. Will need to change this descriptor!
In all cases review what I have said and judge as you see fit on their level of merit against how much effort/work would be involved for suggested changes. I would not say anything has really happened that breaks the logic flow established, and for that reason things don't have to be changed.
Just saying. My favourite visual novel so far. I like all the characters honestly. Can't wait for more content or paths to be brought out. I don't mind which route is being made but I will be waiting for the Dallan route :)
Fun game. Good art. Good music. Interesting characters. Amusing story. Had more humor then I was expecting. Also, a bit too silly at time, at least in my opinion.
There was also one major plot point that I was not a fan of. It didn't make sense given what we know of the world. At the same time it's such a major plot point it has to happen. I'm just not a fan of how it was handled.
It sure made a strong first impression but one that stuck the landing. The setting and sense of humor are my cup of tea, and I really needed to read something lighthearted. I'll definitely keep an eye for updates.
Well, this game is certainly something. Below is my short review of different aspects of the game. The review is my perception of the game, and may be different to anyone else's views.
Let's start with the writing and story. The story itself is somewhat generic, though I do not find it to be much of an issue considering that this is supposed to be a silly horny VN. The writing as some noted isn't perfect, though most of the spelling mistakes aren't detrimental to the story, just something that catches your eye.
The characters. They are amazing. From the design and personality standpoint my favorite is Tate, though Aiden himself isn't the worst looking, nor the most basic of characters, and I enjoyed his route. The bulky wolf (whatever his name is) is somewhat forgettable in the demo as you don't really interract with him a whole lot. As a sidenote the player character is an absolute cutie.
The art. As I said before the characters are very unique in design and personality, which is a feat since it feels like every month we get new VNs with similar premises to this one. The differentiating feature of this VN is deffinitely the art. The emotions are portrayed by the sprites quite well, and overall the scenes look good.
To sum up my opinion (which isn't probably worth a whole lot tbh) this VN has a lot more potential that majority of stuff on this site. I'd place it on the same level as dawn chorus in its overall quality (Dawn chorus is also an amazing VN, check it out). I am truly excited to see where the development will lead, and how it will progress. If I could voice my wishes for future updates it would be a Tate route, and perhaps a route for the wolf, just so the playerbase could get a better understanding of the characters.
edit; To clarify my last point, I mean as in all the characters will get a chapter 1 route before anyone of them progresses into chapter 2. Allowing players to get more personal with characters would allow the dev(s) to better see whom the playerbase wants to see more.
Hi, thanks for taking the time to write such a detailed review, I'm glad you like the art and everything ^^ The game was supposed to be a 20-30 minute play at first, with a very fast paced and simple story that focuses only on the nsfw aspect, then I added more to the story, more characters etc. and decided to just make a more serious game, so I definitely get the generic part.
As for characters, rest assure that the main ones will get their path completed before chapter 2, in fact, on my patreon you can even vote on who's path I focus on next!
Ok this game is way better than I expected! The story is fun, characters are all interesting, lots of great art, great sprites too. The character dynamics are great and the choices were quite fun too. There's a few typos and some common ones like "quiet" instead of "quite" but I wouldn't worry too much. These aren't the type of mistakes that detract from the story a lot. Also the spicy stuff is top notch too, cough.
I was initially not interested in the tiger but he won me over quickly. So honestly kinda thankful his route was the only one there right now because otherwise i'd have went with the wolf sensei and completely ignored the kitty.
I'll try spread the word a bit. I hope we can get regular updates even if they take longer. The chapter 1 was absolutely massive, I think it took me 3 hours to read all?
Can i just say how utterly amazing this was to play! I adored it. Like I'm smiling writing this. I just finished the first bit with Aiden and the writing is impeccable. The humor had me in stitches and i loved the characters. Poor Tate getting contantly picked up like a rag doll but alas it made me giggle. I can't wait to play the other routes while waiting for the update. Just bloody wonderful man. And thank you so much for having it available in android and be free as a exceptionally broke student i appreciate that i can atleast play a quality game without having to go hungry trying to pay for it.
You guys are the best! So excited for more updates!! 🥰😁
I'm glad I could provide some good entertainment ^^, and I sure hope you'll enjoy the rest of the paths because oh boy, this game will be long if the support continues like this
Idk how many people are going to understand this, but the chibi scenes always give me tennis ace vibes. It has that same kind of emotions as the chibi characters in tennis ace. Also amazing game :>
~SPOILER~ Gonna avoid trying to spoil the scene by being vague about it if you have played it you know what scene im talking about (1000% yes on this scene btw was fuckin great) But i thought the scene with the "HM" was about to get mega dark for a second after choosing the "NO" option was not expecting that and not gonna lie im kind of sad it was broken up cause i was ready to either get graped or disintegrate the room lol but that's what the imagination is for.
man its been soooo long to be attract by ALL, and I really meant ALL characters especially the route characters in a vn like this. I'm so glad to finding out of this and I'll be always seeing the upcoming updates in the future.
Love this game so much. The characters were so unique and expressive that I cared about them. The story line was very fascinating. And art is like the cherry on top of this masterpiece. Looking forward to seeing the what's coming next
Found a typo at the start after the MC wakes up "Probably shouldn't say that incase i take some dumbass decisions in the near future and embarrass myself"
i assume "take" is meant to be "make".
Edit: im sorry but "My morning wood on dissapear" gave me a good chuckle id almost want it not to be fixed just for how funny it sounded in my head but "dissapear" should be "disappear" and "on" is unnecessary in the sentence.
No problem also the mom has a typo in the kitchen "exited" should be "excited" and after the drive "expell should be expel" taking my time through the dialog and enjoying it so far figured id give some free spellcheck service. :P
Although not necessarily 'romanceable' I was planning on having most of the non main characters have their own scenes/moments/emotional growth with the protagonist at some point, like Haima, Merina, Chelsie etc. The ones that will definitely have their own unique paths are Aiden, Tate and Dallan.
If everything goes according to plan, expect Haima to play a bigger role in Aiden's path in a future update, but this is not a promise, just an ambition.
For a 1.0ver released, the game is very rich in content. the CG quality is good, although there is room for improvement. the script is simple and easy to understand, lovely plot, and if you are into age diff and cheating you may just found a treasure for yourself.
Please keep this game going on. I think it has a lot of potential.
I'm happy you think that way ^^ I am very exited to continue with the other characters and especially with chapter 2 and if the feedback continues to be this positive, I don't see why that wouldn't happen !
Thanks for letting me know, I was a bit overwhelmed by everything that had to be done before publishing the game, and the fact I don't know how patreon actually works did not help much, but it should be fixed now
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Aiden and Dallan are my favorite. The MC may be awkward but he’s cute and good looking snow leopard. I can see why the boys are attracted to him.
Can't wait to see more Aiden and check out Dallan's route
I enjoyed the first build quite a bit! I can't wait for what you have next in store (that meaning next chapters/routes).
You've got a great main characters' dynamics and the story is enjoyable as well! I've found some spelling mistakes, but it wasn't anything severe that made me lose the sense of the sentence.
Thank you for this ^^
Everything in this game is awesome. I liked it a lot and hope to see more
This VN is absolutely amazing! It has a perfect balance of humor, wholesomeness and horni. I'd even say that this might be one of my 3 favorite VNs of all time that share the same #1 spot. i can't wait to see how this game will go in the future and i hope there won't be any problems in development. I also have a few questions:
1) What is the current update schedule? Every few weeks, a month or multiple months?
2) Will there be TBS fighting mechanics while in a battle against the nigthfallen?
3) Who is the next character in line to get a path? I hope it's Tate hehe ;3
hi there, being in top 3 in someone's list is always great ^^
As for your questions:
1. I'm working on this vn alone so it really depends on how fast I compose the script and make the art, but it should receive an update at least once every 2-3 months as long as the support continues here or on Patreon.
2. Not very likely, it's not a bad idea, and if it turns out to be easier to make than it seems, then maybe, and I mean a BIG maybe.
3. I can't say who will be next, but on my Patreon there is a poll that ends in a couple of days to vote on the next path, if you want to give Tate a better chance, consider voting there ;)
Im now in love with this Vn cant wait for the updates :D
your game is awesome, humor, emotion and characters with a really nice personality (and design) I loved it and I'm really in a hurry to find my little tiger ❤
Wow I really love this vn I'm excited for next update
The art style is very fitting, while its desirable to let he player input a name, I like there to also be a default name to fallback on, we get to have a full but incomplete view of the MC, that makes me VERY happy! Now I know exactly what to envision the MC looking like! Not just a feline, but a Snep! Yay! Any feline would do fur me, but Snep is new! ^^ oh! Would love to see that 2 months ago photo or well the "true" looks, not sure which, heh ^^;,
He doesn't like fish??? Blasphemy!!! XD
Metajokes! XD and a beautiful compromise! In just the fashion I like it!
WWoof!
That was killer, mood, introduction, but priceless! Just how I like it! ^^
Pfff! hahaha too bad the CG is only Chibi, but its also perfect like it to! XD One idea is if you ever make a non chibi version, can show both!
Is this end of meet choice for rest of VN or just CH1? I feel its too soon to lock in a route, we have only just met them. We have a good gasp by now of some of their personalities and quirks, but what we know is still all superficial. I would rather have the chance to know more about each of them, an example or taste of what they have to offer, like some of their simple hopes, dreams, thoughts, etc. Once locked in then delve into more deep and personal ones.
Either way that a cleaver meta redirect! I'll come back for you handsome! I got another one to chase! Oh and will Shard choice and Relationship Route be independent? Would allow for some more flexibility, would only need slight edits and a few bigger ones compared to a pure combo.
Yeah that feels really wrong, to have it stated that the choice was made long ago, predetermined, thus set in stone against ANY forces, yet the player gets to choose it based on a arbitrary choice of crush, before even getting to know ANY of them better? It doesn't compute properly. It is cute, but this seems way too rushed as hell!!!
Ung... family name too? This really ought to be done for us, as it stands to be much winder ranged and open than a first name...
Oh wow that was an excellent choice of song!
I would like to know what that new kitty looks like!
That ending wow! I'd ask more questions but here is not the place, for major spoiler.
Damn.. once again I'm going to have to choose between them! D:, I want them all!... so I guess multiple save files then? hehehe...
Big issue though to keep mention Humans and Humanity when none of the characters are even Human, let alone all Human. Will need to change this descriptor!
In all cases review what I have said and judge as you see fit on their level of merit against how much effort/work would be involved for suggested changes. I would not say anything has really happened that breaks the logic flow established, and for that reason things don't have to be changed.
IM SO EXCITED FOR THIS...lately so many good games has been given up/hiatus...i really hope this one doesnt have that same fate. im so interested.
This VN has massive potential, I hope it gets the backing it deserves and isn't abused.
А что по поводу русского языка на андроид???
Unfortunately, that most likely will never happen unless a dedicated fan decides to take their time and translate the whole script
Боюсь, учитывая незаслуженное, в общем-то, отношение большей части мира к русским, переводить придется самому:)
Does each choice matter a lot or not cause if yes Is there a choice guide?
The choices do matter in some extent although only 2-3 of them are game changing, and no, there is no guide
Just saying. My favourite visual novel so far. I like all the characters honestly. Can't wait for more content or paths to be brought out. I don't mind which route is being made but I will be waiting for the Dallan route :)
I love this game. I hope it continues
Fun game. Good art. Good music. Interesting characters. Amusing story. Had more humor then I was expecting. Also, a bit too silly at time, at least in my opinion.
There was also one major plot point that I was not a fan of. It didn't make sense given what we know of the world. At the same time it's such a major plot point it has to happen. I'm just not a fan of how it was handled.
Either way, looking forward to more.
It sure made a strong first impression but one that stuck the landing. The setting and sense of humor are my cup of tea, and I really needed to read something lighthearted. I'll definitely keep an eye for updates.
I love the game it's fun to play
Well, this game is certainly something. Below is my short review of different aspects of the game. The review is my perception of the game, and may be different to anyone else's views.
Let's start with the writing and story. The story itself is somewhat generic, though I do not find it to be much of an issue considering that this is supposed to be a silly horny VN. The writing as some noted isn't perfect, though most of the spelling mistakes aren't detrimental to the story, just something that catches your eye.
The characters. They are amazing. From the design and personality standpoint my favorite is Tate, though Aiden himself isn't the worst looking, nor the most basic of characters, and I enjoyed his route. The bulky wolf (whatever his name is) is somewhat forgettable in the demo as you don't really interract with him a whole lot. As a sidenote the player character is an absolute cutie.
The art. As I said before the characters are very unique in design and personality, which is a feat since it feels like every month we get new VNs with similar premises to this one. The differentiating feature of this VN is deffinitely the art. The emotions are portrayed by the sprites quite well, and overall the scenes look good.
To sum up my opinion (which isn't probably worth a whole lot tbh) this VN has a lot more potential that majority of stuff on this site. I'd place it on the same level as dawn chorus in its overall quality (Dawn chorus is also an amazing VN, check it out). I am truly excited to see where the development will lead, and how it will progress. If I could voice my wishes for future updates it would be a Tate route, and perhaps a route for the wolf, just so the playerbase could get a better understanding of the characters.
edit; To clarify my last point, I mean as in all the characters will get a chapter 1 route before anyone of them progresses into chapter 2. Allowing players to get more personal with characters would allow the dev(s) to better see whom the playerbase wants to see more.
Overall rating;
9.8/10
Hi, thanks for taking the time to write such a detailed review, I'm glad you like the art and everything ^^ The game was supposed to be a 20-30 minute play at first, with a very fast paced and simple story that focuses only on the nsfw aspect, then I added more to the story, more characters etc. and decided to just make a more serious game, so I definitely get the generic part.
As for characters, rest assure that the main ones will get their path completed before chapter 2, in fact, on my patreon you can even vote on who's path I focus on next!
Ok this game is way better than I expected! The story is fun, characters are all interesting, lots of great art, great sprites too. The character dynamics are great and the choices were quite fun too. There's a few typos and some common ones like "quiet" instead of "quite" but I wouldn't worry too much. These aren't the type of mistakes that detract from the story a lot. Also the spicy stuff is top notch too, cough.
I was initially not interested in the tiger but he won me over quickly. So honestly kinda thankful his route was the only one there right now because otherwise i'd have went with the wolf sensei and completely ignored the kitty.
I'll try spread the word a bit. I hope we can get regular updates even if they take longer. The chapter 1 was absolutely massive, I think it took me 3 hours to read all?
Good stuff.
I dont really know what to say to be honest. This game is so great, and I cant wait for an update
Can i just say how utterly amazing this was to play! I adored it. Like I'm smiling writing this. I just finished the first bit with Aiden and the writing is impeccable. The humor had me in stitches and i loved the characters. Poor Tate getting contantly picked up like a rag doll but alas it made me giggle. I can't wait to play the other routes while waiting for the update. Just bloody wonderful man. And thank you so much for having it available in android and be free as a exceptionally broke student i appreciate that i can atleast play a quality game without having to go hungry trying to pay for it.
You guys are the best! So excited for more updates!! 🥰😁
I'm glad I could provide some good entertainment ^^, and I sure hope you'll enjoy the rest of the paths because oh boy, this game will be long if the support continues like this
Idk how many people are going to understand this, but the chibi scenes always give me tennis ace vibes. It has that same kind of emotions as the chibi characters in tennis ace. Also amazing game :>
really love this vn. ngl i had to stop a few times because i saw some things that could go wrong
Fantastic. You definitely know your audience!
Ngl the game is really good, I wish to see more x
Discord?
There is a discord server for all patreon supporters available at any tier!
~SPOILER~ Gonna avoid trying to spoil the scene by being vague about it if you have played it you know what scene im talking about (1000% yes on this scene btw was fuckin great)
But i thought the scene with the "HM" was about to get mega dark for a second after choosing the "NO" option was not expecting that and not gonna lie im kind of sad it was broken up cause i was ready to either get graped or disintegrate the room lol but that's what the imagination is for.
Can't wait to see where this game goes.
man its been soooo long to be attract by ALL, and I really meant ALL characters especially the route characters in a vn like this. I'm so glad to finding out of this and I'll be always seeing the upcoming updates in the future.
- Satisified Reader<3
Love this game so much. The characters were so unique and expressive that I cared about them. The story line was very fascinating. And art is like the cherry on top of this masterpiece. Looking forward to seeing the what's coming next
So much fun
Found a typo at the start after the MC wakes up "Probably shouldn't say that incase i take some dumbass decisions in the near future and embarrass myself"
i assume "take" is meant to be "make".
Edit: im sorry but "My morning wood on dissapear" gave me a good chuckle id almost want it not to be fixed just for how funny it sounded in my head but "dissapear" should be "disappear" and "on" is unnecessary in the sentence.
thanks for letting me know ~
No problem also the mom has a typo in the kitchen "exited" should be "excited" and after the drive "expell should be expel" taking my time through the dialog and enjoying it so far figured id give some free spellcheck service. :P
Although not necessarily 'romanceable' I was planning on having most of the non main characters have their own scenes/moments/emotional growth with the protagonist at some point, like Haima, Merina, Chelsie etc. The ones that will definitely have their own unique paths are Aiden, Tate and Dallan.
If everything goes according to plan, expect Haima to play a bigger role in Aiden's path in a future update, but this is not a promise, just an ambition.
Very likely
This is a very horny vn and the plot heavily allows limitless horny things to happen lol
So even if we "only" get 3 characters to romance, I can see the side characters getting ocassional action too. (we already got one but i won't spoil)
For a 1.0ver released, the game is very rich in content. the CG quality is good, although there is room for improvement. the script is simple and easy to understand, lovely plot, and if you are into
age diffandcheatingyou may just found a treasure for yourself.Please keep this game going on. I think it has a lot of potential.
I'm happy you think that way ^^ I am very exited to continue with the other characters and especially with chapter 2 and if the feedback continues to be this positive, I don't see why that wouldn't happen !
this is fuckin mint
Nice game so far
I'm glad you liked it :3
Looks good, I'll have to wait for Android version because no pc rn
That will be available as soon as I figure out how to do it :)
The link to Patreon here is wrong.
Thanks for letting me know, I was a bit overwhelmed by everything that had to be done before publishing the game, and the fact I don't know how patreon actually works did not help much, but it should be fixed now
I'm not into furries, but this game is amazing. Art, story, humor, implementations - everything is ingenious. Can't wait to see more!
I'm so happy you enjoyed it ^^
As the Ghanaians say are you...
CATBOY
And multiple of them too :D