hey, so uhm is this one of those vns where when they say whatever name you put in for the mc isnt real then it says your actual name? i have seen that in a fe good vns but this one did it (i think it was either in theriums route or early alvys route) either way, it freaked me out a bit more than others have lol
also, whats this about this cody character im seeing in the comments?
Doing Alvy’s route, and Cody says his phone is dead, but… his whole thing was that he’s only good for charging phones. Also, the mention OSHA makes me so confused. Is this the US, or a completely different world?
That leaves me with more questions. Spells, and innate abilities (the unique abilities the cast possess) use energy. Then what uses magic? Am I understanding this right?
Also, Cody’s sandwiches in Tate’s route. Where did they go in the other ones? 🙂
If I choose Alvy, will we definitely not have a future? Please let him survive in the second chapter, even if I can't be with him, please don't let him become a victim of the conspiracy.
oh……thanks. The final scene of Alvy's third day, where his teacher assassinated the two of them, made me misunderstand. But from your responses to others, does Alvy's route not continue?
Actually, this game is fucking well made, the endings, the lore, the characters ( specially tate, i liked him ) the endings are kinda cool, i did all of them, the fourth wall talk and jokes, the narrator ( us ) and the us leopard, ( very gay ) is very well made, the tail, Fur and etc.
HOW DARE YOU :( THAT BETTER NOT BE IT MAH DOG MAH POOR LIL DOG I NEED MORE OF HIMMM YOU DID NOT JUST KILL HIM :( anyways w update as always and also HOT AF but the ending is finna make me crash out lol ((/j)) (all though it does make me sad because I was hoping Alvy was going to be a major route alongside Dallan, Tate, and Aiden)
MY POOR LITTLE NOT SO INNOCENT (and actually pretty damn freaky) PUPPY
I WILL find you and I WILL recreate the Tate route ritual and be successful (unlike big hunky bara tiger nightfallen man wildfur thing)
I wonder if you plan on ever compiling all the game's music in one place for easy access? The tracks in the game are SO good but I'm having a hard time finding the artists even with their credits 😅😅 It would be epic though!
I have a theory about the time loops! Knowing that some thoughts can persist for a short time through a time loop, if you can focus on your dying shortly before the time loop, you could remember that you had died before. Doing this would give you the ability to start finding out who killed you and how to avoid it. Doing this enough times while burning in previous memories from past loops into your mind could eventually give you enough information to either completely dodge the death or kill your killer.
Most of this is probably inaccurate, but this is more of a far-out theory than anything serious.
It looks like Tate's route still happens just with Tate and Aiden instead of with Cody. You find them stealing food in one of the routes and they just make excuses not to talk about it. I don't remember anything about sandwiches in Dallans route. It's been a while since i've gone through them all.
Just went through Alvy’s route (and Therium’s,) and there they do that. But in Dallan’s route there is nothing like that. Also, Cody doesn’t have his sandwiches in Alvy’s (and Therium’s) either so, I guess Cody’s sandwiches only exist for Tate, and for Tate only. He must be the author’s precious little boy to get special treatment.
If MOF is reading this, please, i have a question. On the other routes (Aiden, Dallan and Tate) it's planed see Scribbles like our narrator, or that would be something exclusive of his route? Thx.
Also, where can we find the song that Aiden play with his guitar?
I have made an account JUST TO COMMENT THIS. Spoilers below for Alvy day 3:
I swear upon the most almighty Yog-Sothoth above and the most abominable Azathoth below, if that is the end of Alvy's route, and if I'm not able to resume my Alvy fantasy where it left off WITH NOBODY DEAD AND MEMORIES INTACT, there will be consequences the likes of which you will have never seen before, MoF.
Ok so, I just finished with Alvy day 3 and I´m really sad. I mean, he and Aiden are my favorites, and now I saw THAT ending... I already was expecting the thing of restart and looses the memories like on Therium´s route; but, STAB Alvy? I wasn´t expecting something like that. The truth is that was an incredible end (But that don´t change the fact of I really wanted a happy ending for the poor dog, he already suffer so much...). In any case, I really hope that Therium die in the most painful way imaginable, he deserves the worst of the worst.
Im fucking hurt. im in distress. i spent hours loving, caring, and choosing alvy only for him to fucking die and us NOT remember????? this shit is fucking rough, man. Alvy didn't deserve that at ALL. he deserved the happiest of endings, the ending where cody and him could grow old together in his aunt's fuck ass home. We helped alvy actually feel loved, feel something, feel alive. and you just killed him off like that. im mad. im fuming. im hurt. im angry. im enraged. im disgusted. im mortified. im HORRIFIED. alvy deserved so much better. i love alvy so much and just playing his route made me feel hope. Made me think that holy shit, maybe cody and alvy arent just incredibly horny for eachother. yeah lol, you, mindoffur, you are going in my suicide note. like what the actual fuck?????????????? they confessed, yes it was too good to be true but you killed him?????????????? AND WE DONT REMEMBER????????????? YOU ARE EVIL AS FUCK YO. EVIL. I AM PISSED MF IM FUCKING PISSSSSSSSED. I LOVED ALVY. im suing you.
I love what you created, I felt a lot of things playing all the routes, dallan is my goat, i was proud of our little tate, aiden is kind of the neglected child ngl, but frankly and respectfully..
I HATE YOUUUUUUU
YOU MONSTER
HOW COULD YOU
(honestly I'd like a haima route more than anything else but)
i love your work so much, even though there are things i would have loved to be different in narration (no offense)
i love all the little things and hint you spray all throughout your story and how you strive to perfect it
honestly, i even love aiden's route despite or maybe because of it's imperfection, it's like a first dip of your toes in the story and lore (my first route actually) where you scramble all the hints for what will be going on. and i know you would make it better still and our splitboy will become as horny as he deserves
but, and spoilers here
goddamnit, alvy route end was so much.. I'm not trying to say you did wrong or anything, it's just.. i felt so loved during it, so happy, you made it perfect little love story.. and then deus ex machina it ended like that.. it's like I've been gutted all over the floor.....
im so sad for what alvy could get,the potential,never realized in the next instance (or parrallel unverse idk) of the story,for cody not remembering any of it (actually i won't be surprised he will remember all the potential routes down the line considering THEY saw it), the cruelty of it all
the fact that cody needed to go through therium and alvy to reach scribbles...
you really outdone yourself but at the same time, fuck you, with passion
Everything, it mischaracterizes him, it's too tame, and his split personality wasn't even something I thought about until close to the end of his route then added some vague stuff in between to hint at it. Don't even get me started on the Headmaster's writing. It also feels very unfair that Aiden's route literally became a unit of measurement for other routes "Tate's route is as long as 3 Aiden routes!"
I really appreciate the effort you put into the novel all things considered. It became one of my favorites within an hour of reading and I really love to see that you dedicate yourself to giving us stuff of quality
Oh don't get me wrong after reaching the limit of Tate's route, I started one with Aiden. I'm just asking because the stop during Tate's was kinda sudden and just when things started to really speed up.
I know how I word things can be pretty confusing at times, but in all honesty I found that it's really good I'm really looking forward to playing more of it. I really like the artwork and not just the NSFW ones all the artworks is beautiful I hope I can help in anyway I can.
Man i LOVE your game! I downloaded it 5 days ago, and i ALMOST finished all routes ALL BEST ENDING TOO YIPPIEEE.. i only need to finish Alvy's and start Scribble's. Heres my ranking so far of my favorite routes i've completed ;
1 - Tate's route!! Poor lil guy the end made me shed a tear i swear😭💝 love him so much my wittle baby
2 - Dallan's route!! I love our big defender boyo💖!! Was my first route i started with and messed up the first time, but i had best ending after mt second try!
3- Aiden's route! Hes alright! I still am a bit confused on how to know which aiden it is, even though the text is mostly how i know which one is there.. STILL A VERY HANDSOME BOYO! WOULD REPEAT AGAIN!💘
-10000000 Therium... yeah uhh.. dont approach us anymore 😬🥀
Alvy's route and Scribble's route still in progress on my part! Ill give a ranking when i finish em!💅🗣💓
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hey, so uhm is this one of those vns where when they say whatever name you put in for the mc isnt real then it says your actual name? i have seen that in a fe good vns but this one did it (i think it was either in theriums route or early alvys route) either way, it freaked me out a bit more than others have lol
also, whats this about this cody character im seeing in the comments?
Doing Alvy’s route, and Cody says his phone is dead, but… his whole thing was that he’s only good for charging phones. Also, the mention OSHA makes me so confused. Is this the US, or a completely different world?
Cody uses energy for his... well, energy manipulation, not magic, which are different things, and he was kind of out of energy.
I should really explain how the magic system actually works but I've been putting it off for Scribbles' route, which is next update
That leaves me with more questions. Spells, and innate abilities (the unique abilities the cast possess) use energy. Then what uses magic? Am I understanding this right?
Also, Cody’s sandwiches in Tate’s route. Where did they go in the other ones? 🙂
Will we get more Alvy in the future?
Please don't tell me that's all we get😭
If I choose Alvy, will we definitely not have a future? Please let him survive in the second chapter, even if I can't be with him, please don't let him become a victim of the conspiracy.
He's not dead
oh……thanks. The final scene of Alvy's third day, where his teacher assassinated the two of them, made me misunderstand. But from your responses to others, does Alvy's route not continue?
Miss Aiden so much, hope can see him again soon <3
Is it just me or does it feel like Alvy is the true route? Not that I didn't like other routes but his just feels perfect
It's because Alvy's route actually has an ending, compared to the others who will continue in chapter 2.
the end of the Alvy update is too fair why killed you cruel
OH MY GOD, I didn't expect that ending but did see it coming
I would be very sad if I couldn't be with Alvy in Chapter 2
im in desperate need of a cutesy wholesome alvy focused lust shards spin off
Heros here.
Actually, this game is fucking well made, the endings, the lore, the characters ( specially tate, i liked him ) the endings are kinda cool, i did all of them, the fourth wall talk and jokes, the narrator ( us ) and the us leopard, ( very gay ) is very well made, the tail, Fur and etc.
Bye guys currently mourning Alvy as if he were real 😭😭💔
Huh
Alr i just finished Alvy (spoilers)
HOW DARE YOU :( THAT BETTER NOT BE IT MAH DOG MAH POOR LIL DOG I NEED MORE OF HIMMM YOU DID NOT JUST KILL HIM :( anyways w update as always and also HOT AF but the ending is finna make me crash out lol ((/j)) (all though it does make me sad because I was hoping Alvy was going to be a major route alongside Dallan, Tate, and Aiden)
MY POOR LITTLE NOT SO INNOCENT (and actually pretty damn freaky) PUPPY
I WILL find you and I WILL recreate the Tate route ritual and be successful (unlike big hunky bara tiger nightfallen man wildfur thing)
! POSSIBLE SPOILER !
Just finished the Alvy route last night, IT WAS SO GOOD!! AAHHHHRGHEJWSHHAJNSN 😭😭🙏🙏
Like, the plot, visual, and EVERY SINGLE DETAILS OF THE ROUTE, WAS SO FRIGGIN TOP NOTCH!💯💯👌👌
But, the ending's definitely not as expected (happily ever after kinda ending??) 😭
Like, they deserved that kind of ending, because why? BECAUSE THEY'VE ALREADY FORGED THEIR RELATIONSHIP, LIKE, THEY'RE MORE THAN FRIENDS ALREADY 💔💔🥀🥀
Well, aside from that, I enjoyed every single moment of these two (Cody and Alvy), and I MEAN IT.
Overall, Alvy's route, ♾️/10!!!
Thank you for the greatest creation, MoF!!! I LOVE YOUUUYUUUUUUSJSHDHSJAJANZB 😭😭💯💯❤️❤️
I wonder if you plan on ever compiling all the game's music in one place for easy access? The tracks in the game are SO good but I'm having a hard time finding the artists even with their credits 😅😅 It would be epic though!
I have a theory about the time loops! Knowing that some thoughts can persist for a short time through a time loop, if you can focus on your dying shortly before the time loop, you could remember that you had died before. Doing this would give you the ability to start finding out who killed you and how to avoid it. Doing this enough times while burning in previous memories from past loops into your mind could eventually give you enough information to either completely dodge the death or kill your killer.
Most of this is probably inaccurate, but this is more of a far-out theory than anything serious.
it's not a time loop, I hate time loops and would never use one </3
That Alvy event is a fun thing to add.
I’ve only taken a look at Tate’s and Dallan’s route, and I am wondering what happened to Tate’s son, and Cody’s sandwiches in Dallan’s route.
It looks like Tate's route still happens just with Tate and Aiden instead of with Cody. You find them stealing food in one of the routes and they just make excuses not to talk about it. I don't remember anything about sandwiches in Dallans route. It's been a while since i've gone through them all.
Just went through Alvy’s route (and Therium’s,) and there they do that. But in Dallan’s route there is nothing like that. Also, Cody doesn’t have his sandwiches in Alvy’s (and Therium’s) either so, I guess Cody’s sandwiches only exist for Tate, and for Tate only. He must be the author’s precious little boy to get special treatment.
If MOF is reading this, please, i have a question. On the other routes (Aiden, Dallan and Tate) it's planed see Scribbles like our narrator, or that would be something exclusive of his route? Thx.
Also, where can we find the song that Aiden play with his guitar?
... (SPOILER)
IM losing it. Atleast we can get scribble route now, why is everything unraveling at the alvys route and just had him killed and Cody 😭
Its so emotional on everyway 😭
And also does it implies that therium and the other is trying to bring back scribble
Dallan ❤️
bruh can tate even be fucked by the vines this is literally NOT POSSIBLE
I have made an account JUST TO COMMENT THIS. Spoilers below for Alvy day 3:
I swear upon the most almighty Yog-Sothoth above and the most abominable Azathoth below, if that is the end of Alvy's route, and if I'm not able to resume my Alvy fantasy where it left off WITH NOBODY DEAD AND MEMORIES INTACT, there will be consequences the likes of which you will have never seen before, MoF.
Do those consequences require going outside?
Same, i feel the same. I hope we can continue Alvy route in chapter 2 ot im going to lose mi sh*t
Oof, I am glad I finished Alvy's route on the end of a good day so there wasn't much left to ruin :c
MoF you are evil... But damn that route was the best one hands down....
i get an exception after waking up:
in gam/alvy.rpy line 3369, alvyday2 not defined.
I can't wait to deliver Scribbles' route to it's fullest ʕ·ᴥ·ʔ
SPOILERS, YOU WERE WARNED
Ok so, I just finished with Alvy day 3 and I´m really sad. I mean, he and Aiden are my favorites, and now I saw THAT ending... I already was expecting the thing of restart and looses the memories like on Therium´s route; but, STAB Alvy? I wasn´t expecting something like that. The truth is that was an incredible end (But that don´t change the fact of I really wanted a happy ending for the poor dog, he already suffer so much...). In any case, I really hope that Therium die in the most painful way imaginable, he deserves the worst of the worst.
Amen ...
SPOILERS
Im fucking hurt. im in distress. i spent hours loving, caring, and choosing alvy only for him to fucking die and us NOT remember????? this shit is fucking rough, man. Alvy didn't deserve that at ALL. he deserved the happiest of endings, the ending where cody and him could grow old together in his aunt's fuck ass home. We helped alvy actually feel loved, feel something, feel alive. and you just killed him off like that. im mad. im fuming. im hurt. im angry. im enraged. im disgusted. im mortified. im HORRIFIED. alvy deserved so much better. i love alvy so much and just playing his route made me feel hope. Made me think that holy shit, maybe cody and alvy arent just incredibly horny for eachother. yeah lol, you, mindoffur, you are going in my suicide note. like what the actual fuck?????????????? they confessed, yes it was too good to be true but you killed him?????????????? AND WE DONT REMEMBER????????????? YOU ARE EVIL AS FUCK YO. EVIL. I AM PISSED MF IM FUCKING PISSSSSSSSED. I LOVED ALVY. im suing you.
sorry the grammar is so bad i was crying and typing at the same time.
Dear MoF
I love what you created, I felt a lot of things playing all the routes, dallan is my goat, i was proud of our little tate, aiden is kind of the neglected child ngl, but frankly and respectfully..
I HATE YOUUUUUUU
YOU MONSTER
HOW COULD YOU
YOU HAD NO REASON TO DO THIS
My poor baby TwT
#Justiceforalvy
ffreaking hell, mindoffur......
i love your work so much, even though there are things i would have loved to be different in narration (no offense)
i love all the little things and hint you spray all throughout your story and how you strive to perfect it
honestly, i even love aiden's route despite or maybe because of it's imperfection, it's like a first dip of your toes in the story and lore (my first route actually) where you scramble all the hints for what will be going on. and i know you would make it better still and our splitboy will become as horny as he deserves
but, and spoilers here
goddamnit, alvy route end was so much.. I'm not trying to say you did wrong or anything, it's just.. i felt so loved during it, so happy, you made it perfect little love story.. and then deus ex machina it ended like that.. it's like I've been gutted all over the floor.....
im so sad for what alvy could get,the potential,never realized in the next instance (or parrallel unverse idk) of the story,for cody not remembering any of it (actually i won't be surprised he will remember all the potential routes down the line considering THEY saw it), the cruelty of it all
the fact that cody needed to go through therium and alvy to reach scribbles...
you really outdone yourself but at the same time, fuck you, with passion
heavily agree. i cried.
Exit music (for a film), matches alvys final chapter so much. Absolute peak once again.
Absolutely fucking phenomenal update. So well done, fantastic job. I wait for every update eagerly, they are so fucking good~
MOF.
MOF!
WHAT THE FUCK!
You had NO RIGHT.
NONE.
Absolute Cinema, but still.
Question: what specifically about Aiden's path needs rewritten?
Everything, it mischaracterizes him, it's too tame, and his split personality wasn't even something I thought about until close to the end of his route then added some vague stuff in between to hint at it.
Don't even get me started on the Headmaster's writing.
It also feels very unfair that Aiden's route literally became a unit of measurement for other routes "Tate's route is as long as 3 Aiden routes!"
I really appreciate the effort you put into the novel all things considered. It became one of my favorites within an hour of reading and I really love to see that you dedicate yourself to giving us stuff of quality
It took forever but it was worth it ♥
Okay Alvy's route has more but what about the others like Tate, Dillon and everyone else's routes?
*sigh* at least there was an attempt at Dillon, Aiden didn't even get that </3
Oh don't get me wrong after reaching the limit of Tate's route, I started one with Aiden. I'm just asking because the stop during Tate's was kinda sudden and just when things started to really speed up.
I know how I word things can be pretty confusing at times, but in all honesty I found that it's really good I'm really looking forward to playing more of it. I really like the artwork and not just the NSFW ones all the artworks is beautiful I hope I can help in anyway I can.
I am going to kill someone and you all know who 😡
Who? :O
Is it Bean...?
Oh believe me if someone touches Bean there will be three dead bodies
Man i LOVE your game! I downloaded it 5 days ago, and i ALMOST finished all routes ALL BEST ENDING TOO YIPPIEEE.. i only need to finish Alvy's and start Scribble's. Heres my ranking so far of my favorite routes i've completed ;
1 - Tate's route!! Poor lil guy the end made me shed a tear i swear😭💝 love him so much my wittle baby
2 - Dallan's route!! I love our big defender boyo💖!! Was my first route i started with and messed up the first time, but i had best ending after mt second try!
3- Aiden's route! Hes alright! I still am a bit confused on how to know which aiden it is, even though the text is mostly how i know which one is there.. STILL A VERY HANDSOME BOYO! WOULD REPEAT AGAIN!💘
-10000000 Therium... yeah uhh.. dont approach us anymore 😬🥀
Alvy's route and Scribble's route still in progress on my part! Ill give a ranking when i finish em!💅🗣💓
The horse is goooood c'mooon </3 he's literally a war refugee.
And keep some space near the top for Alvy, you'll need it.
BUT YOU SAID HE WANTS TO KILL EVERY LIVING THING
BECAUSE HE'S A BROKEN INDIVIDUAL HIS HEART CAN BE GLUED BACK ON PROMISE
HE KILLED BEST DOGGO I CAN'T FORGIVE THAT EVEN IF IT'S INDIRECTLY! i just wanna see alvy happy is that too much to ask ;-;
Alvy Day 3 spoiler...
MINDOFFUR YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME WHYYYY
Why must you kiss the brick before chucking it at my head like this???
Frankly at this point it's more like kissing the shotgun before blowing my head off :(
"Frankly at this point it's more like kissing the shotgun before blowing my head off :("
OMG Alvy reference! ^°^
finally got around to reading the new intro, enjoying it quite alot!