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Great writing, a lot of funny moments and likeable characters! Can't wait for more updates. 

Question.... Just how large is the arena? I suspect that its large enough to hold atleast a 100 or more atleast.

I'm guessing at LEAST 175 people could fit in the stands, probably way more cuz of magic or something. There are probably quite a LOT of people we haven't met in the school (we never meet them, they're stuck in the mysterious fourth route that isnt out, ect), but there are probably a LOT of people.

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The arena is like a smaller colosseum, so it fits around 5000-6000 people.

SMALL?! SHIT! TO ME IT SOUND FUCKING LARGE!

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amazing!

played the tate route and loved it, cant wait for the next chapter


the main character has a lot of personality, it was a lil hard for me at first to put myself in his shoes cuz of his very subby very bottomy verbalized fantasies (which reminded me of a couple of my partners haha xP) but aside from that was great

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Loving the game, can’t wait for more Tate the most!

Question tho, since there is multiple endings, which one would be continued off for Chapter 2?

Will you at some point be making 100% guides for every route? I remember seeing one for Tate, but no one else. If not, I totally understand! However, it would certainly be helpful ^-^

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So, I've just finished all 3 routes... Am in LOVE with all 3 Characters, a little more with Tate on a personal level, but Aiden and Dallan have their spot on my List as well. I just cant wait for future updates for this VN, only a couple other furry novels managed to capture my emotions like that and made me think a lot... in a good way! also tear up a little...

But my gamer brain also wants to unlock aaaaall the scenes... and i just cant wrap my head around how to get the last two NSFW scenes on Dallan's route. If anyone could give me some insight on that it'd be very much appreciated.

Other than that, thank you for giving us such a sweet story dear Developer. i'll be waiting for a new update patiently however long it's gonna take <3

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Glad you liked my boys :3 

For Dallan's last scene you're gonna want to spend as much time with Chelsie as possible BUT make sure to go to detention with Dallan, the scenes will come up soon after Chelsie's nsfw scene.

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Thank you SO much, now i've seen everything this novel has to offer! and that last scene... yeah it was worth it x3

I repeat myself a lot, but i'll say it again. Cant wait for future updates good sir! :3

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Love Dallan!!!(づ ̄ 3 ̄)づ

please tell me theres a full guide 


i managed to 100% aiden but all i got from dallen was straight stuff and tate has like 4 uncomplete pages

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So i was thinking about something and i now have a question?

If you don’t scam Coal,

Learn teleportation canceling magic,

Save Tate from being fucked by a n.f. plant,

And win against Dallan and Aiden,

But also

Sucked Connor’s dick,

Spend a lot of time with Oliver,

And had a gangbang with a n.f. tribe,

Would you still get a good ending even though you were a MASSIVE SLUT?

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Spending time with Oliver or Merina can still get you the neutral ending, but not the best ending.
Acting like a slut while also being as faithful as you can to Tate will let you have the best ending :)

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Well getting anything than bad ending is already the best ending.

And also yeah that is actually true sex is not really important as much as just spending more time with Tate and helping with stuff.

Thx for answering and have fun with making chp2.

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That was me. I never want to get the bad or worst endings again. The worst ending for Tate's route just shook me up and left me crying for about 2 hours rambling on about how it all broke my heart. Always going for the best stuff; keep it up, this vn is the best one I've ever used... AND I LOVE CODY!! >:3

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Yes. That gets you the best ending.

Just for curiosity, there will be a translation to spanish or other languages more later on?

Unfortunately that is not up to me, but if other languages do appear I'll make sure to make a post bout it :]

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TL;DR: GREAT VN which makes me paranoid about it being dropped in a few years if the author gets burnt out because it seems like such a huge premise and has a ton of work involved just for the first chapter

This VN concerns me because it seems like it has the potential for a vast world with a ton of interesting characters that can make for a lengthy story  (that would make a good written book as well) which is great because so far it's amazing and I'm fully sucked into the world, but I've seen so many "deep/long" VNs stall for years (2 come to mind that I won't name) or get cancelled or the creators get burnt out after years of writing/drawing and I'm wary about getting invested BECAUSE the first chapter was so good...i'd be fully willing to pay for the completed version of this w/e it's done however long it takes but I don't want it to be dropped, I'm just paranoid i'll be story blue balled by another great VN ;-; Not even in it for the nsfw parts since i'm ace but the story/chars have me fully invested and I hope there's lots more to come cuz this has the potential to be my new fav of all time.

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No worries dear fan! Even if the project is delayed at some point, for one reason or another, rest assured that I will rise from my grave to finish it >:3

I do hope it doesn't take too long to finish it, since I already have ideas for other games I wanna try to make. But even if it does, updates should still come at a regular pace, aka: No yearly updates

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Finally i finished all the routes!!! THIS GAME IS SO GOOOOD!!! hope for the chapter 2

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Played every route and I loved every second of each of them. Though, I was wondering if there's a terrible/bad ending for Dallan's route? Since the other two had one. 

SPOILER!:







I've tried doing all the opposite (at least I believe so) of the "good" options and got the ending of Cody being set aside of heart for Dallan's route. Is this the "bad ending" or is there an even worser ending that's available for Dallan. If so, I'd really want to see it. 

Love the game, can't wait for ch2 and further routes. <3

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Glad you enjoyed it :3
Both Aiden and Dallan have 3 endings, the only way to get Dallan's worst ending is to choose the worst option when talking with Chelsie about her Nightfallen business. I believe the choice is something like "Walk out disgusted".

OH! TYSM!! I got it.

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I really made an account just to leave a comment, I really fuckin enjoyed tates route and i need me some more tate in my life aaaaaaaa hes fucking adorable

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What update this time? O.o

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just some quality of life, no worries, major updates will always be made into a devlog :]

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The amount of heart put into this is massive and it really shows! Such a well-written VN; a great balance of comedy, romance, and a beautiful world to go along with it. Thank you for all of your hard work!

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Absolutely love what you're making, dude! Keep up the fantastic work :)

When you choose to talk to no one scribbles says that Tate's route is incomplete when it is complete for chapter 1

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Thank you, I am aware

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Can someone please tell me what that song is when Tate is laying in the Daisy Feild. because it really gets to me and I like the song so if anyone knows the name of it please tell me

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I believe the one you're talking about is "Your foundation" by Sporadic Rat :)

Unfortunately I don't think you'll find it anywhere since it's an original song and the ost is not out yet.

wait a minute then how did you get it

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It's a song specifically made for Lust Shards

Ok

When will the OST come out?

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When there are enough songs to make a playlist, I assume that will be after the next update.

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Did I already write a review for this without completing at least one path, yes. Is it currently 4am because this vn has kept me up, yes. I am ABSOLUTELY HOOKED, this vn is hilarious and the music fits everything perfectly. Not only that the art style is fantastic. I'm on tates path because yes, and I am super engrossed in the story. Not to mention Tate is my ideal type anyway. But yeah just a comment on the appreciation of this masterpiece of a vn. I am genuinely super stoked for any feature updates and projects. I obviously don't have much feedback yet but I am willing to give all to potentially help improve the experience for others!

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I would like to ask 

Will Chinese translation be added?

Yep, already out :)

https://x.com/FinnYoe/status/1708805353251786781?s=20

Thank you ouo

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I haven't finished the VN yet but I can say it is amazing. For one it is very funny and I haven't seen much myself from other VNs I've read. Then the plot is quite filling both romance wise and just story. I haven't finished any routes yet and planning on doing all of them. Through out the novel I would sit there and think how this could totally be an anime which is just me and my opinion. I love the art style it is the best I've seen imo, and I enjoy all the scenery and sprites! Amazing work 11/10, and I am definitely excited for future updates and revamps.

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Glad you enjoyed it! Can't wait to hear your thoughts on all the endings ^^

I'll be honest, I did fantasize about making an anime opening in the past, but that would mean like...a year worth of work :>

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I wasn't sure if to reply or make a new one entirely anyways. This is for Tates route and everything in general

SPOLIERS

Oh. My. God. That was amazing a treat a masterpiece a five star Michelin meal. Damn were the scenes good and holy crap the story. That was so rich and flavored, I just want more. Everything paces out perfectly and just makes sense mostly. I had moments where I questioned everything then later on I realize and everything clicked. The cuddling scene is so precious imo even the picnic date, aaaaaa it's so cute I could die. I also love how all the friends were just super hype and excited for it, I adore it.Then the dream glad we could uh yk figure out the mystery, but to see how his inner child is whole again is something I 1 never seen but 2 something that just relates so hard. Everyone starts with nothing but is always given something they just need to make do with it. The picnic scene and daisy hill  was so akslalaoxjnala, everything just so beautifully crafted. And so much packed in for just 1 singular chapter, 1. This obviously took years to develop this if not years then count me impressed. This is hands down best VN I've read. Are there times that are effy yeah, I can say the music isn't great but it works. I have felt emotionally involved in everything, I've cried twice, gotten angry, been super excited and happy. It's just the package that delivers. A lot of this isn't related to Tates route specifically but I don't have much to say other than that it is exponential. I can't wait for another chapter, but most importantly all the routes possible. This was truly an experience, it's that fantasy world I've always dreamed of being in except for the lust but that's a bonus. Mof you did fantastic on creating such a thing, I am honestly very excited for whenever the next update will be

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Help how do i get the dallan nsfw scenes??

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You can only get nsfw scenes "around" Dallan, his story line hasn't reached this stage yet and neither for the other two. You may even say it's in "cuddles and kisses" state.

Just wondering, but aside from a couple of scenes, how exactly is this an NSFW game? I'm (according to itch) 3 hours into the game. And the only real NSFW stuff, was some dialogue (and a, I guess technically? Censored scene)

No like, major story spoilers please. And I'm on Dallan's route (really wanted, Therium's? "Cause...His Shard, and definitely nothing else. But it's not out yet)

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The scenes are not meant to be shoved down your throat, if you look for them, they're there. Dallan's has a total of 3 so far.

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Hey MindOfFur, i was curious to ask if Aiden will maybe get a reboot of his route or at least a quality upgrade with more content? Dont get me wrong, i love his route and its the one that made me love this VN since the beggining. But Dallan's and Tate's routes are so fucking good with much higher quality (maybe because Aiden's was just the demo) that i am left a bit sad that Aiden is not getting something similar. Also his route is much much shorter than the others.

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Yep, Aiden will get almost a complete redo and Dallan will get a bit of extra content too.

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this is the best vn i have ever read hands down. 12/10

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fish flavored chips is atrocious 😭

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but either way 10/10 vn 

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Beware of spoilers.

Most likely, tomatoes will fly in my face for this opinion, but I will still speak out.It will be about Tate, or rather about his obsessive nature towards the main character and how much he himself is an asshole.

The main character, in order to help Tate, even takes a desperate step by giving a stranger a blowjob, and argues with the director of the academy, taking on the risks of being kicked out of school, and how does Tate thank him for this!? – He constantly whines and insults the snow leopard if he does not spend time with him. And so it will be the whole route, he will scold MC for deciding to spend time with others (for example, with Merina and Oliver), and not with him, he will constantly impose his thoughts on him and criticize him for walking with a mouse and a fox, and not with him. The MC has known him for only 1-2 days and is not obliged to give all his time only to him. There is no such obsession in the route of Dallan or Aiden, they do not treat the protagonist in such a way as if he owes them something.

While I was reading, I just want to tell Tate:
- You and I have known each other for three days, what kind of friends are we?! I don't have to give all my time just to you, fuck off from me and let me spend time with whoever I want!

However, this is a matter of taste, this can actually be forgiven by making a reference to a neutral route.

But Tate's most despicable act at the end of the update infuriated me even more.
This cat deliberately throws the MC to death, and he did not even try to do something to save him, at least to call for help after teleportation, for example. Even if Tate had lost almost all of his mana, he could have called for help by teleporting to the academy, or at least to the nearest payphone to call the academy. However, he did not do this and left the MC to certain death, because he was offended, like a small child who was not given enough attention. And how convenient that after that the protagonist forgets all the events and does not blame Tate for what he did.

I would also like to say about the demon, which was completely forgotten in this update. He spent an unknown amount of time in prison, but all he does is watch Netflix in the head of the MC - seriously!? At the end of the game, if you follow Tate, in order to save the MC from death, the demon teleports his clothes with an amulet, BUT previously he could not do this for some reason, - why?

I hope the author will not delete my comment. I don't think Tate is a bad and terrible character, I just expressed aspects I didn't like about him.

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I respect your opinion BUT:

Counter arguments!

-In Dallan's and Aiden's routes, when choosing to go with the side routes, it does not affect the boys in the least, since with Haima, Aiden is the one that ditches you, and with Dallan it's kind of similar plus it's his best friend so yeah, he doesn't mind. With Tate you constantly tell him "Sorry, I wanna hang out with these guys instead, bye, you do you." In his own words from the bad route: "Why do you build me up just to break me down again?"
- If Tate saves you at the end, he's warned that he will die, which he does, technically, both in the good and neutral ending, but he's 'revived', meaning he cares enough for Cody to sacrifice himself. When he leaves him, he has just enough magic to collapse but not die. By the time he can reach help it's too late.
-As for Scribbles, he said he's just not too interested in the Wild Furs and would rather watch movies, if that's not good enough of a reason for someone that's okay,  I get it. I will say that one of the reason I decided to push his comments back a little was to just...not ruin the moments, since most of the 3rd day is a bit more serious/emotional but still sexually charged enough for him to come out from time to time.
I definitely don't think Tate or Cody or Aiden or even Dallan are perfect characters morally, but I do want to defend my little traumatized cat boy.


Oh, as for the amulet, I don't remember every detail or plot point in the game, but remember that Scribbles can only cast spells if Cody allows him to, so since Cody never told him to save him or do anything like that, he couldn't, same with the pants and amulet, but maybe I'm missing something here idk :v

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I agree with you in many ways. Tate doesn't know how to behave with people, but it's not his fault. I think the bigger problem is the one-sidedness of the plot. What I mean is: you are literally told almost at the very beginning of your journey to choose the path of the character. And that's it, you chose it and you no longer have the opportunity to go to another route, only to a bad/ neutral / good ending, no more. I hope that there will be more choices in chapter 2.

That's why the Ollie Route is best route. the fact that he can turn you down? and Tate asks you to turn him down?! amazing. 12/10

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Well I agree with the comment above. Tate surprised me. I've been waiting for him for so long, and he turned out to be a candy with a bitter filling.

He literally left Cody to die. The very act of not trying to do anything at all already says a lot about him.

At least he could have told someone about what happened after the incident, but he just decided to keep quiet. - Well, someone died, so what, little things, right? Or almost died.

Besides, he could teleport to the academy, even if he could not speak, but simply fell unconscious, this would already serve as a signal to others that something bad had happened.

Tate's route, trying to bring us closer to him, but I, on the contrary, felt myself moving further away from him. Eventually, I found solace in route with Oliver and cute lynx from the village, it's a shame that there will be no continuation of it.

Of course, respect from me to the author, for such a great big update with many arts. 

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Does anyone know how to get the top left CG on NSFW Aiden page 2?

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For the CG you have to basically make all the bad choices with Aiden's route then "Ask about Aiden"

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Is there a guide for unlock all nsfw cg and endings availables? I only found one for tate route but i want ones for aiden and dallan routes

Is there a way to unlock all the scenes in the gallery? Is because there are in the game a lot of choises and i am lost with them

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I've got all of Tate's gallery but somehow i'm still missing all the scences in page 3, 4 of NSFW Tate, also the same case with NSFW Aiden page 2 image 1, and all of NSFW Dallan.... Is there a guide on how to get it and can i have it?

Will there be updates to the existed stories? Because i sure love what i've seen so far, from the art style to  the story, perfectly my type, but i saw someone comment it will get rework or something, at least for Aiden.

I personally don't like how vn with routes works, purely because i sometimes can't figure how to get to some of the endings or scences. But for this project i sure try hard. Pls help me >.< Thanks!

Dallan is my #1 favorite in the vn!

But I also enjoyed Aiden's and Tate's route. I'm eager to see how old Scribbles plays out in his upcoming route. Then is onwards to Chapter 2 with my Dallan! ❤️

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I 100% can't wait for more from Dallan's Route. the game said i got the best possible ending, but thats still yet to be seen, all i got was his kiss. though very intimate, and sweet, and i loved every second of it.

Me too, fellow Dallan fan

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10/10 game. I didn't expect it to hit me in the feels as hard as it  did, especially on Tate's ending. Keep up the great work!

Also may I ask if there's anywhere I can listen to the soundtrack? I can only find like 2 songs online and none in the files. Thanks!

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Okay, first of all, congratulations on this project! It's really amazing how I expected something like a sexual scene every few lines of dialogue with a very simple story but I got a very elaborate plot (at least, with Tate's Rute, that is the one that I'm playing at the moment) and very heartwarming characters. Yeah, the sexual theme is everywhere, but it isn't annoying and, in a lot of times, the jokes and the humor is fantastic.

My questions is... The routes that are completed are Dallan's, Aiden's and Tate's, am I right? What will it be the last route? I'm super curious about it :3

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The grandpa's route aka Scribble, The MC will also join the summoner shard.

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Tate's route is just such a beautiful story of 2 fuckboys finding each other 🥹 I love it so much

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