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Did Scribbles lie in Dallan's route? 





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After the threesome with Chelsea Scribbles tells Cody he got bored/fell asleep bc it was so boring/pedestrian for someone like him, but then "writes in his diary" that it was the best sex he's ever had. Is it a plothole? or is it foreshadowing that Scribbles can and does lie all the time?

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Waffle :p

Pancake >:D

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3 OR 4 Months To Go Bruh :/

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I would rather wait 3-4 months for a full route and the quality of the story, don't rush art.

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Mind. Fucking. Blown. Hands down, my new favorite visual novel. At first I thought this was just another cheesy dating simulator BUT NO! This has some of the most fun and creative story building I've seen in a while. 10/10, recommending this masterpiece to all my friends. Don't overwork yourself, I hope to see you continue this project in the near future.

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Thank you for making an amazing game and I hope to see more updates in the future honestly this visual novel is a work of art it's the best one I've ever known good job

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Is there any way to get the NSFW tate gallery on page 5? I have been trying to find other ways yet I can't seemed to get it.. I litteraly need help...

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that's the "Ollie breaks your ass" page. you gotta let him break your ass instead of fucking his brains out. which btw its so endearing how excited he gets to top even tho he seems like the stereotypical bottom. 

10/10 he really is best boy

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Hi, I firstly want to start off by saying how truly wonderful this Visual Novel was to read. I spent almost 12 hours straight just reading through the 3 paths. I've been sick, so it was a great distraction from that. I absolutely loved it, and I have a few quick questions I'd like to ask. If they're things you don't wish to reveal or simply don't have an answer for yet, I totally get it. I also apologize if you've been asked these questions before.

1: Will each ending of the paths have continuations, or only the good/neutral? The bad/worst endings didn't really seem to have much of an opportunity to fix things in later chapters. I also can't imagine how much work it would be to have the paths diverging that much.

2: I noticed my playtime for Tate's path alone was slightly more than both Aiden and Dallan combined (not that I'm complaining. I like long stories). I think the best way I can describe it is that Tate's path felt like its own standalone novel. The other paths were great, but are there plans to maybe expand them a bit to be more in line with the quality of Tate's? I feel like Aiden's route could use a face-lift the most. I am very intrigued by his character and very much desire more.

3: Why the fuck is Oliver so cute? Like, I thought I had a thing for the small, shy type before, but Oliver easily takes the cake. For real though, I'm amazed at just how much the side characters shine and stand on their own in this VN. It makes the world feel a lot more alive to have them more present instead of just being plot devices. I guess this one was less a question and more just some praise.

I genuinely want to thank you for creating this VN. It genuinely might be the best one I've read yet. Absolute 11/10!

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Hey there, I'm happy you enjoyed it so much! No better medicine than some nice smut with plot :3

Yes, the paths will continue from the best outcome, and most importantly all of them will contain spoilers from all the routes in chapter one, so good thing you're up to date :]

Tate's story was easy to write for some reason, but he still has a lot of development to go through in the next chapter. Aiden will absolutely get a rework, there are many things I don't like about it and yes, it is too short. Dallan will also get a bit more content but nothing major. Ultimately Tate's route will remain the longest one of the bunch, even counting the last route, but not by a landslide.

I love designing side characters so I can feed the reader all the spicy content without actually rushing in with the love interests. Oliver is definitely one of the best bois out there. :) A surprising amount of people are either kind of indifferent towards him or absolutely adore him, but nobody can hate that adorable anxiety ball.

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Bro I Read Novels in 20 Hours a Day and Only Have 4 Hours of Sleep Waiting For Updates Like Hell And That's Just Hard Man, But Can't Help it It's Just The Stories and Art Is Sooo Good Well Can't Really Do Anything since I'm a Shut In

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Is there a guide for the nsfw cg for Aiden and Dallan's routes?

I absolutely love this game

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So I far I finished the game twice, first time the best ending, second time the bad ending, both in the Tate route. The best ending really was, "the best" ending, everyone was happy and that's it, nothing else to point out. But the bad ending, even though the player doesn't die, if I was in the place of the main character, I'd rather death over the ending. Tate might have even said "cat got your tongue?" Or something like that, and yeah, you did Tate. I'm Sorry 

good news! try going for the bad ending and then changing course at the ferris wheel! 

Great writing, a lot of funny moments and likeable characters! Can't wait for more updates. 

Question.... Just how large is the arena? I suspect that its large enough to hold atleast a 100 or more atleast.

I'm guessing at LEAST 175 people could fit in the stands, probably way more cuz of magic or something. There are probably quite a LOT of people we haven't met in the school (we never meet them, they're stuck in the mysterious fourth route that isnt out, ect), but there are probably a LOT of people.

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The arena is like a smaller colosseum, so it fits around 5000-6000 people.

SMALL?! SHIT! TO ME IT SOUND FUCKING LARGE!

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amazing!

played the tate route and loved it, cant wait for the next chapter


the main character has a lot of personality, it was a lil hard for me at first to put myself in his shoes cuz of his very subby very bottomy verbalized fantasies (which reminded me of a couple of my partners haha xP) but aside from that was great

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Loving the game, can’t wait for more Tate the most!

Question tho, since there is multiple endings, which one would be continued off for Chapter 2?

Will you at some point be making 100% guides for every route? I remember seeing one for Tate, but no one else. If not, I totally understand! However, it would certainly be helpful ^-^

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So, I've just finished all 3 routes... Am in LOVE with all 3 Characters, a little more with Tate on a personal level, but Aiden and Dallan have their spot on my List as well. I just cant wait for future updates for this VN, only a couple other furry novels managed to capture my emotions like that and made me think a lot... in a good way! also tear up a little...

But my gamer brain also wants to unlock aaaaall the scenes... and i just cant wrap my head around how to get the last two NSFW scenes on Dallan's route. If anyone could give me some insight on that it'd be very much appreciated.

Other than that, thank you for giving us such a sweet story dear Developer. i'll be waiting for a new update patiently however long it's gonna take <3

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Glad you liked my boys :3 

For Dallan's last scene you're gonna want to spend as much time with Chelsie as possible BUT make sure to go to detention with Dallan, the scenes will come up soon after Chelsie's nsfw scene.

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Thank you SO much, now i've seen everything this novel has to offer! and that last scene... yeah it was worth it x3

I repeat myself a lot, but i'll say it again. Cant wait for future updates good sir! :3

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Love Dallan!!!(づ ̄ 3 ̄)づ

please tell me theres a full guide 


i managed to 100% aiden but all i got from dallen was straight stuff and tate has like 4 uncomplete pages

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So i was thinking about something and i now have a question?

If you don’t scam Coal,

Learn teleportation canceling magic,

Save Tate from being fucked by a n.f. plant,

And win against Dallan and Aiden,

But also

Sucked Connor’s dick,

Spend a lot of time with Oliver,

And had a gangbang with a n.f. tribe,

Would you still get a good ending even though you were a MASSIVE SLUT?

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Spending time with Oliver or Merina can still get you the neutral ending, but not the best ending.
Acting like a slut while also being as faithful as you can to Tate will let you have the best ending :)

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Well getting anything than bad ending is already the best ending.

And also yeah that is actually true sex is not really important as much as just spending more time with Tate and helping with stuff.

Thx for answering and have fun with making chp2.

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That was me. I never want to get the bad or worst endings again. The worst ending for Tate's route just shook me up and left me crying for about 2 hours rambling on about how it all broke my heart. Always going for the best stuff; keep it up, this vn is the best one I've ever used... AND I LOVE CODY!! >:3

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Yes. That gets you the best ending.

Just for curiosity, there will be a translation to spanish or other languages more later on?

Unfortunately that is not up to me, but if other languages do appear I'll make sure to make a post bout it :]

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TL;DR: GREAT VN which makes me paranoid about it being dropped in a few years if the author gets burnt out because it seems like such a huge premise and has a ton of work involved just for the first chapter

This VN concerns me because it seems like it has the potential for a vast world with a ton of interesting characters that can make for a lengthy story  (that would make a good written book as well) which is great because so far it's amazing and I'm fully sucked into the world, but I've seen so many "deep/long" VNs stall for years (2 come to mind that I won't name) or get cancelled or the creators get burnt out after years of writing/drawing and I'm wary about getting invested BECAUSE the first chapter was so good...i'd be fully willing to pay for the completed version of this w/e it's done however long it takes but I don't want it to be dropped, I'm just paranoid i'll be story blue balled by another great VN ;-; Not even in it for the nsfw parts since i'm ace but the story/chars have me fully invested and I hope there's lots more to come cuz this has the potential to be my new fav of all time.

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No worries dear fan! Even if the project is delayed at some point, for one reason or another, rest assured that I will rise from my grave to finish it >:3

I do hope it doesn't take too long to finish it, since I already have ideas for other games I wanna try to make. But even if it does, updates should still come at a regular pace, aka: No yearly updates

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Finally i finished all the routes!!! THIS GAME IS SO GOOOOD!!! hope for the chapter 2

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Played every route and I loved every second of each of them. Though, I was wondering if there's a terrible/bad ending for Dallan's route? Since the other two had one. 

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I've tried doing all the opposite (at least I believe so) of the "good" options and got the ending of Cody being set aside of heart for Dallan's route. Is this the "bad ending" or is there an even worser ending that's available for Dallan. If so, I'd really want to see it. 

Love the game, can't wait for ch2 and further routes. <3

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Glad you enjoyed it :3
Both Aiden and Dallan have 3 endings, the only way to get Dallan's worst ending is to choose the worst option when talking with Chelsie about her Nightfallen business. I believe the choice is something like "Walk out disgusted".

OH! TYSM!! I got it.

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I really made an account just to leave a comment, I really fuckin enjoyed tates route and i need me some more tate in my life aaaaaaaa hes fucking adorable

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What update this time? O.o

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just some quality of life, no worries, major updates will always be made into a devlog :]

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The amount of heart put into this is massive and it really shows! Such a well-written VN; a great balance of comedy, romance, and a beautiful world to go along with it. Thank you for all of your hard work!

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Absolutely love what you're making, dude! Keep up the fantastic work :)

When you choose to talk to no one scribbles says that Tate's route is incomplete when it is complete for chapter 1

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Thank you, I am aware

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Can someone please tell me what that song is when Tate is laying in the Daisy Feild. because it really gets to me and I like the song so if anyone knows the name of it please tell me

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I believe the one you're talking about is "Your foundation" by Sporadic Rat :)

Unfortunately I don't think you'll find it anywhere since it's an original song and the ost is not out yet.

wait a minute then how did you get it

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It's a song specifically made for Lust Shards

Ok

When will the OST come out?

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When there are enough songs to make a playlist, I assume that will be after the next update.

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Did I already write a review for this without completing at least one path, yes. Is it currently 4am because this vn has kept me up, yes. I am ABSOLUTELY HOOKED, this vn is hilarious and the music fits everything perfectly. Not only that the art style is fantastic. I'm on tates path because yes, and I am super engrossed in the story. Not to mention Tate is my ideal type anyway. But yeah just a comment on the appreciation of this masterpiece of a vn. I am genuinely super stoked for any feature updates and projects. I obviously don't have much feedback yet but I am willing to give all to potentially help improve the experience for others!

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I would like to ask 

Will Chinese translation be added?

Yep, already out :)

https://x.com/FinnYoe/status/1708805353251786781?s=20

Thank you ouo

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I haven't finished the VN yet but I can say it is amazing. For one it is very funny and I haven't seen much myself from other VNs I've read. Then the plot is quite filling both romance wise and just story. I haven't finished any routes yet and planning on doing all of them. Through out the novel I would sit there and think how this could totally be an anime which is just me and my opinion. I love the art style it is the best I've seen imo, and I enjoy all the scenery and sprites! Amazing work 11/10, and I am definitely excited for future updates and revamps.

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Glad you enjoyed it! Can't wait to hear your thoughts on all the endings ^^

I'll be honest, I did fantasize about making an anime opening in the past, but that would mean like...a year worth of work :>

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I wasn't sure if to reply or make a new one entirely anyways. This is for Tates route and everything in general

SPOLIERS

Oh. My. God. That was amazing a treat a masterpiece a five star Michelin meal. Damn were the scenes good and holy crap the story. That was so rich and flavored, I just want more. Everything paces out perfectly and just makes sense mostly. I had moments where I questioned everything then later on I realize and everything clicked. The cuddling scene is so precious imo even the picnic date, aaaaaa it's so cute I could die. I also love how all the friends were just super hype and excited for it, I adore it.Then the dream glad we could uh yk figure out the mystery, but to see how his inner child is whole again is something I 1 never seen but 2 something that just relates so hard. Everyone starts with nothing but is always given something they just need to make do with it. The picnic scene and daisy hill  was so akslalaoxjnala, everything just so beautifully crafted. And so much packed in for just 1 singular chapter, 1. This obviously took years to develop this if not years then count me impressed. This is hands down best VN I've read. Are there times that are effy yeah, I can say the music isn't great but it works. I have felt emotionally involved in everything, I've cried twice, gotten angry, been super excited and happy. It's just the package that delivers. A lot of this isn't related to Tates route specifically but I don't have much to say other than that it is exponential. I can't wait for another chapter, but most importantly all the routes possible. This was truly an experience, it's that fantasy world I've always dreamed of being in except for the lust but that's a bonus. Mof you did fantastic on creating such a thing, I am honestly very excited for whenever the next update will be

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Help how do i get the dallan nsfw scenes??

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You can only get nsfw scenes "around" Dallan, his story line hasn't reached this stage yet and neither for the other two. You may even say it's in "cuddles and kisses" state.

Just wondering, but aside from a couple of scenes, how exactly is this an NSFW game? I'm (according to itch) 3 hours into the game. And the only real NSFW stuff, was some dialogue (and a, I guess technically? Censored scene)

No like, major story spoilers please. And I'm on Dallan's route (really wanted, Therium's? "Cause...His Shard, and definitely nothing else. But it's not out yet)

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The scenes are not meant to be shoved down your throat, if you look for them, they're there. Dallan's has a total of 3 so far.

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Hey MindOfFur, i was curious to ask if Aiden will maybe get a reboot of his route or at least a quality upgrade with more content? Dont get me wrong, i love his route and its the one that made me love this VN since the beggining. But Dallan's and Tate's routes are so fucking good with much higher quality (maybe because Aiden's was just the demo) that i am left a bit sad that Aiden is not getting something similar. Also his route is much much shorter than the others.

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Yep, Aiden will get almost a complete redo and Dallan will get a bit of extra content too.

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this is the best vn i have ever read hands down. 12/10

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fish flavored chips is atrocious 😭

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but either way 10/10 vn 

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