The "oh, that's why" hits unexpectedly hard on Dallan's route. I have many guesses but that wasn't my on list and I wasn't ready for that. Good job on this update. I see a lot of improvement. Very few typos compare to the previous build. Although, there are some wrong dialogue being showed like when it was supposed to be a narration but it shows as someone was saying it and if I remember correctly, there is 1 each for Chelsie and Dallan (I have a memory life span of a baby goldfish so I could be very wrong and yes, I didn't take a screenshot of those errors. I'm so sorry)
Woow what can I say about this update, I laughed a lot, shed tears, my heart melted with tenderness and my feelings were like a roller coaster, I really enjoyed every minute. Keep it up, I can't wait for the next update.
Hey I'm sorry to be a bother but could you possibly put platform tags on the 1.1 update, I use the itch.io app and you can't download games without platform tags, once again sorry to be a bother, but if you could that would be greatly appreciated.
This was a fantastic update! I love the little meta joke about his family seeing him as the runt of the family, especially considering how ironic our response is to that considering what we learn later. Wishing you luck fellow university student, and I look forward to seeing what comes next.
You might want to look over the image for the detention scene, with Aiden at the front desk. His legs look too far away from his torso, like he was meant to be leaning back and stretched out, rather than sitting up mostly straight with his legs on the desk.
Omg.. I wasn't expecting to actually cry reading this. The forest scene was so good, I had my suspicions but it was a surprise nonetheless. Dallan was already my favorite character, but now I love him even more.
Thx for the update it was really well written. I like how their relationship is developing, can't wait for his chapter 2.
Also, he's up there in the good boy list alongside Amicus and Spencer now, such a pure bean❤️.
Rolling, crying, screaming at the new update... But in addition, this update is the best so far in my 2023, so unique and so... emotionally ;( Anyways this changes a lot and i hope you get lots of love in this vn.
Now i shall go back crying rolling and screaming while i read both route again because i like pain in my heart when it comes to beautiful stories
So Aidens route isnt being worked on right now, since its done for chapter one. And as far as i know, the next update, which is supposed to come out in probably a week or less (judging by a reply MindOfFur made 15 days ago), will have all the routes for chapter one done, though i might be wrong on this one, since ive got that info from a comment in here.
Chapter 1, there will be a small update with 2-3 cg's when the public version comes out, and an extra scene that I have an idea for whenever I have the time to do it. Chapter 2 will start after all Chapter 1 routes are done.
The full route of chapter one, yes, the second chapter will most likely be made into a different game with its own files so this one doesn't become over 2gb.
1. The development began in August, so its been almost 6 months since the start of the development (yes there was thr Hima update but that miniscule).
2. A 2 month old reply to a comment made by Charafemboy said that MindOfFur would be releasing it all in one go (its not the most reliable source, but combine that with the first argument and you get quite a nice picture)
this game may be riddled with weird grammar and the occasional spelling error, but it manages to be absolutely hilarious anyway. When I noticed this visual gag, I burst out laughing
I'm just wondering if the headmaster it's gonna have it's own route? I know people probably hate him (with reason) but it would be kind nice if they could have a separated route without the son but with a similar beginning and star becoming like a sex only relationship that later on they start catching feelings or something like that
In my opinion any headmaster options I feel will end in like the bad end for Aidens route, Who knows maybe he will pop up here and there to tempt the main character away from your current routes... We will have to see when the Vn gets new routes but I like how ya think haha
This game is AMAZING, likely one of the best ive seen in a long time. The characters are charming and I love their interactions with each other. Especially the banter; all the lines are heccin hilarious ("You will not shackle me with your completely fair laws!!!!"). I also really like the chibi CGs that make transitions feel interesting. I'm excited to see the other routes and where the story will go. If I were made to offer a criticism, then I wish it would take some time to foreshadow and set things up a little more. I'm probably just being an idiot and missing some things, but for example, when Aiden revealed that he has a clone of himself, it felt a bit like it came out of left field (not that it ultimately bothered me). As a suggestion, sprinkling more obvious clues throughout the route such as having someone ask "how are you in two places at once" to make the reader more suspicious or making it more reasonable that he's capable of creating a clone by having him go into greater detail with his powers can help make it seem less random. Overall, however, this game is EASILY a 9/10 and I love what you've made so far! I can't wait for the next build
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The "oh, that's why" hits unexpectedly hard on Dallan's route. I have many guesses but that wasn't my on list and I wasn't ready for that. Good job on this update. I see a lot of improvement. Very few typos compare to the previous build. Although, there are some wrong dialogue being showed like when it was supposed to be a narration but it shows as someone was saying it and if I remember correctly, there is 1 each for Chelsie and Dallan (I have a memory life span of a baby goldfish so I could be very wrong and yes, I didn't take a screenshot of those errors. I'm so sorry)
Woow what can I say about this update, I laughed a lot, shed tears, my heart melted with tenderness and my feelings were like a roller coaster, I really enjoyed every minute. Keep it up, I can't wait for the next update.
can this get fixed please, I want to play! :(
I'm having the same problem.
Where is the guitar piece Aidan plays from? It was really nice to listen to!
Yes i can finally download it :
Hey I'm sorry to be a bother but could you possibly put platform tags on the 1.1 update, I use the itch.io app and you can't download games without platform tags, once again sorry to be a bother, but if you could that would be greatly appreciated.
This was a fantastic update! I love the little meta joke about his family seeing him as the runt of the family, especially considering how ironic our response is to that considering what we learn later. Wishing you luck fellow university student, and I look forward to seeing what comes next.
im having a problom up dating it
While I was going through this route, I cried so much that I ran out of tears. It was just great!
Thank you for the wonderful story, thank you for the huge amount of cute CG's and thank you for my best and beloved Dallan!!
Can't wait for the next update! Thank you for your amazing work💕
And thank YOU for playing! ^^
You might want to look over the image for the detention scene, with Aiden at the front desk. His legs look too far away from his torso, like he was meant to be leaning back and stretched out, rather than sitting up mostly straight with his legs on the desk.
Absolutely worth the wait, I didn't expect the twist at all but now I'm remembering all the weird things from before and it's starting to make sense.
Same, I was like WhAT....ohhhhhhhh.
Now it makes sense why he can't play arcade games to well, among other things. It's a well placed twist, that's for sure.
Just finished the new build... Chef kiss dear author! I really love that little twist and Bean is excellent.
Congratulations I really liked the novel continue like this congratulations to your team.
Omg.. I wasn't expecting to actually cry reading this. The forest scene was so good, I had my suspicions but it was a surprise nonetheless. Dallan was already my favorite character, but now I love him even more.
Thx for the update it was really well written. I like how their relationship is developing, can't wait for his chapter 2.
Also, he's up there in the good boy list alongside Amicus and Spencer now, such a pure bean❤️.
Happy I could bring another lovable wolf to life ^^ Hopefully the other routes will make you feel all sorts of ways as well!
Rolling, crying, screaming at the new update... But in addition, this update is the best so far in my 2023, so unique and so... emotionally ;( Anyways this changes a lot and i hope you get lots of love in this vn.
Now i shall go back crying rolling and screaming while i read both route again because i like pain in my heart when it comes to beautiful stories
The one time when making someone cry is an absolute win and delight :D
After about half a year wait, its here! Still cant believe that I have been following the progress on this for so long, well, guess it has paid off
Glad you liked it ^^ It sucks that studying doesn't let me work more on my silly little furry projects, but that's how life be sometimes :x
This novel is just perfect, I love it!!! ★.★
Thanks for the update!
yay new update.
I can finally hangout with Dallan just a couple more days im soo exciter !!!!
just a few more days I'm so excited.
is their a therium route
Yep, there will be
Sorry, but when planned demon rout?
That will be worked on only after Tate's route is done.
Looking forward to Tate's route.
High levels of cuteness.
Yes indeed
I want to get it it looks good but I can’t sadly
There is, it's on Patreon and will come out with Dallan's route.
ok someone answer, is aiden route being done first or dallan? i remember the creator said that it would be aiden first but i dont even know now.
So Aidens route isnt being worked on right now, since its done for chapter one. And as far as i know, the next update, which is supposed to come out in probably a week or less (judging by a reply MindOfFur made 15 days ago), will have all the routes for chapter one done, though i might be wrong on this one, since ive got that info from a comment in here.
Aiden's full route is done and Dallan's is out on Patreon, also done, Tate's being worked on next.
when will the update with Dallas be made publicly available?
The start of February
roger-roger
Ohhh wow. Is Aiden route available on patreon or something? I've been looking everywhere for info on it.
Aiden's ch1 route was the first one released and can be downloaded from above
Do you mean dallan's chapter 1 is on patreon or full-full everything done, no more dallan updates after this one done?
Chapter 1, there will be a small update with 2-3 cg's when the public version comes out, and an extra scene that I have an idea for whenever I have the time to do it. Chapter 2 will start after all Chapter 1 routes are done.
I see, so game is split into chapters and that's what you meant by "full route".
The full route of chapter one, yes, the second chapter will most likely be made into a different game with its own files so this one doesn't become over 2gb.
Update will out this month?
Who is the next route?
Dallan
Seems we will have to wait longer to experience more cuteness from Tate.
Probably not
1. The development began in August, so its been almost 6 months since the start of the development (yes there was thr Hima update but that miniscule).
2. A 2 month old reply to a comment made by Charafemboy said that MindOfFur would be releasing it all in one go (its not the most reliable source, but combine that with the first argument and you get quite a nice picture)
Aiden is perfect
honestly one of my favorites....thats hard. i love aiden so much.
this game may be riddled with weird grammar and the occasional spelling error, but it manages to be absolutely hilarious anyway. When I noticed this visual gag, I burst out laughing
He said next year for sure tho
Do you think the Doodle disappeared somewhere after the kiss of Cody and Aiden, because he was jealous of our main character to the tiger? 🤔
The Doodle will have its own route, right?
His name is Scribbles, but no, that was not the reason he disappeared :)
Yes, I know that's his name, but the translator translated it like this ╥﹏╥
never expected the "wonderful blue-haired woman" to be Jinx-
I'm just wondering if the headmaster it's gonna have it's own route? I know people probably hate him (with reason) but it would be kind nice if they could have a separated route without the son but with a similar beginning and star becoming like a sex only relationship that later on they start catching feelings or something like that
In my opinion any headmaster options I feel will end in like the bad end for Aidens route, Who knows maybe he will pop up here and there to tempt the main character away from your current routes... We will have to see when the Vn gets new routes but I like how ya think haha
So... i can aks about next the update coming this year or the next one? X3
Aka this december or in January?
Patrons might get it this month, public will be released next year for sure
Thanks X3.
Waiting for that X3.
second christmas let's gooooo
Dear author of this masterpiece, can I ask for the names of all the music playing in the game? 👉👈
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This game is AMAZING, likely one of the best ive seen in a long time. The characters are charming and I love their interactions with each other. Especially the banter; all the lines are heccin hilarious ("You will not shackle me with your completely fair laws!!!!"). I also really like the chibi CGs that make transitions feel interesting. I'm excited to see the other routes and where the story will go. If I were made to offer a criticism, then I wish it would take some time to foreshadow and set things up a little more. I'm probably just being an idiot and missing some things, but for example, when Aiden revealed that he has a clone of himself, it felt a bit like it came out of left field (not that it ultimately bothered me). As a suggestion, sprinkling more obvious clues throughout the route such as having someone ask "how are you in two places at once" to make the reader more suspicious or making it more reasonable that he's capable of creating a clone by having him go into greater detail with his powers can help make it seem less random. Overall, however, this game is EASILY a 9/10 and I love what you've made so far! I can't wait for the next build
Also where do i find aidens song ost?
Ty
it's actually unfairly, practically incongruously beautiful wth