I do enjoy the game. The art is appealing and so far the story is coherent with a few jokes and antics to keep things relatively lighthearted. Them drinking kvass almost had me laugh, not because it was funny, but that I really didn't expect it. Next thing you know they'll be having have borsch and cabbage rolls in the slayer's shard. The occasional typos don't bother me.
Personally I think Haima could probably have something similar to what was done with Chelsie, but maybe something more passive until the 'curse' is broken in a later chapter. This would just be something I would like to see, nothing beyond that.
i am barely 10 minutes into the game but DEAR GOD the arts really nice i like the main characters sarcasm and whatnot and i allways love a good ol fourth wall break here and there this is probably one of the only games on itch that made me laugh out loud
Probably the game size is kinda big and your download speed is too slow, I had the same issue before but you can try to download it on your phone that's work well for me
Anyone know where the music from this is from? I've definitely heard some of the music in the school before, I want to say in Socially Awkward? Still loving the application here :3
I already really love this VN. I am going to be brutally honest, and say that the writing could use some spellcheck, as there are a lot of grammar - and spelling mistakes. However.. That is not central and I don't love the story any less for it. Maybe get chat-Gpt to run through the script in little sections, for future updates? I imagine that might be quite painless, enabling you to continue focusing on writing, rather than proof reading :)
I mean I'm pretty sure he's a scouter. He did only adopt Aiden for his Illusion abilities. Maybe he knows about the MC's Energy Manipulation and a hot twink is probably just a bonus for him.
I can't update the game on the itch app keeps saying " An error occurred during installation htfs.Open (initial request): in conn.Connect, non-retriable error: in conn.tryConnect, got HTTP non-2XX: api.itch.io: HTTP 400: {"errors":["invalid upload"]} " I was able to download the game before but wont let me update at all.
Man, I love this so far. Both chapters are fairly long, each with its own twist and turn, i really really hope the develompent of this doesn't just cease, even if it takes a few years to finish.
I love the idea for Aiden so much, its just too cool and original I mean having two of you exist permanently and it doesn't look like one of them is the "real one" they are both as real as the other. I can't wait until we learn more about how it works.
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I do enjoy the game. The art is appealing and so far the story is coherent with a few jokes and antics to keep things relatively lighthearted. Them drinking kvass almost had me laugh, not because it was funny, but that I really didn't expect it. Next thing you know they'll be having have borsch and cabbage rolls in the slayer's shard. The occasional typos don't bother me.
Personally I think Haima could probably have something similar to what was done with Chelsie, but maybe something more passive until the 'curse' is broken in a later chapter. This would just be something I would like to see, nothing beyond that.
It was fun and I hope to see chapters.
i am barely 10 minutes into the game but DEAR GOD the arts really nice i like the main characters sarcasm and whatnot and i allways love a good ol fourth wall break here and there this is probably one of the only games on itch that made me laugh out loud
ITS SO GOOD OMG I NEED AN UPDATE ON THIS 😭😭
real
I don't know why it's forbidden whenever I try to download it
Well I say keep trying. I've had no problems of this and installed fine a few days ago.
k I will keep trying
Probably the game size is kinda big and your download speed is too slow, I had the same issue before but you can try to download it on your phone that's work well for me
I finally downloaded and OMG ITS SO GOOD I NEED MORE😭😭
the next update is for when?
Ren'Py Visual Novel Engine
I need more Dallan as soon as possible!
So far im LOVING it and am SUPER excited to see more
IM IN LOVE WITH THIS PROJECT
(could add censore / uncensore options)
the only thing i think would make this game better (aside from more of this amazing game) would be a gallery
idk know how to code so it might be really hard but i think it would improve the game
yep thats exactly what i thought about aswell a gallery section would be awesome
love this vn, it pretty cool
What species of monty is actually? is he a gator, cause that name fits one.
Is Dallans soundtrack theme an original?
This is so fucking brilliant! Now this is one of my SSS+ Games alongside Adastra and Nekojishi!
The picnic scene was so romantic!!
Incredible visual novel and one of my favourites. Just a question tough. When will Dallan's route be on mobile?
Dallan's route already on mobile my dude.
no its not lmfao. Mobile version is still 1.0 when pc version has it and is 1.1
If it apparently is then i'll try to reinstall it. But i don't think it is.
WAS IT MONTY?! TELL ME. I find this comic to be beautiful and humorous. XD
This is the best one yet can't wait to see Dallans route
Anyone know where the music from this is from? I've definitely heard some of the music in the school before, I want to say in Socially Awkward? Still loving the application here :3
Definitely worth waiting for.This one is of the best one yet!!!
The twists for Aiden and Dallan were super cool and very well written! Can't wait to see what else is in store :3
Will there be a route focusing on the MC and the Headmaster?
+100 to this pls. Maybe kind of an "evil" route with him would be very interesting.
Cant wait for next update. (Daaaaallllllaaaaannnnnnn the best, i love him so much). I wish you good luck for your game. ❤️
Cant wait for chapter 2!!!!!!
I already really love this VN. I am going to be brutally honest, and say that the writing could use some spellcheck, as there are a lot of grammar - and spelling mistakes. However.. That is not central and I don't love the story any less for it. Maybe get chat-Gpt to run through the script in little sections, for future updates? I imagine that might be quite painless, enabling you to continue focusing on writing, rather than proof reading :)
THIS IS SO FRICKING GOOD I NEED MORE OF THIS HONKY STUFF ( btw just a quick question if the developers saw this when is the next update or chapter? )
It won't let me update it on the itch app anymore something about invalid upload.
What update??? The devlog seems still the old one
Is there going to be more Aiden or Headmaster Routes?
Is it just me or does the headmaster seem a little obsessive over the mc
I mean I'm pretty sure he's a scouter. He did only adopt Aiden for his Illusion abilities. Maybe he knows about the MC's Energy Manipulation and a hot twink is probably just a bonus for him.
🗿a bonus??? 💀
Spoiler
The headmaster is such a creep... No wonder why Aiden despise him.
I will support this game when I can, because this is the first time I had the biggest laughs from it
I can't update the game on the itch app keeps saying " An error occurred during installation htfs.Open (initial request): in conn.Connect, non-retriable error: in conn.tryConnect, got HTTP non-2XX: api.itch.io: HTTP 400: {"errors":["invalid upload"]} " I was able to download the game before but wont let me update at all.
This is a downbad visual novel in all the right ways
Man, I love this so far. Both chapters are fairly long, each with its own twist and turn, i really really hope the develompent of this doesn't just cease, even if it takes a few years to finish.
I love this VN cuz it actually makes the different paths distinguishable, and the characters are different but interact well.
Is there gonna be a gallery?
I really like the pace and development of the story. Keep updating as long as you can.
this VN actually become my favorite!
the path of aiden and dallan are perfect!
I love them all... a lot, but Scribbles has to be my favorite character. He is so sassy and hilarious. Can't wait for his route!
Spoiler for mr. sexy tiger!
I love the idea for Aiden so much, its just too cool and original I mean having two of you exist permanently and it doesn't look like one of them is the "real one" they are both as real as the other. I can't wait until we learn more about how it works.