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However progress is going I just hope all is well! 
This VN is adorable and I love it! Got hooked right away and I can't wait for more!

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so ive been trying lots of things by now and i cannot find the last scene i need from tates route. in the gallery its right after the plant nightfallen scene anyone can help?

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Which one specifically? Because the plant scene is 6 frames, and then Merina's scene is another 6 frames.

ok so i just checked again and it seems im missing a single frame from the plant scene the fourth one to be specific. no clue how im supose to get it

You basically have to drag the fight out as long as possible. I think the way I got it was in a route where I spent a ton of time with Ollie and Merina instead of Tate. When I got to the plant scene, I chose to let Scribbles handle it, and then chose to cut it with air blades.

New stories still not coming out yet? :((

What is new in the 1.3 update? Devlog?

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Is it??

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Is it just a bugfix or something else?

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Someone on Patreon used their personal account and wanted their name changed.

Plus some mistakes corrected: In the audition battle a CG that was meant for Cody's auditions would appear in Tate's audition.

In the Nightfallen nsfw scene there was a little visual bug.

And I forgot to lock the art in the game's folder after turning the .png files into .webp oopsie :]

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I finally got through it the first time for all routes I am still trying to wrap my head around how I avoided not getting the best ending... Then again, I turned down all the attempts to do something lewd, so maybe that would be it.

Anyway, that is beside the point I came to give my opinion albeit If I have been reading these comments correctly it appears one of the routes will be getting a remake so it will not matter in the long run. but I figure giving a current opinion would be interesting since I am just coming off my first playthrough of all the routes. (Albeit I still need to go through the entire game again trying to hunt the other endings.)

Spoilers Ahead:(You have been warned.)

Tate's Route: The most recent one and the one with the most action and world-building in it. I have to say I feel like I should have gone through these in the order of the update to make this hit harder. But seeing someone cheerful actually has a lot of pent feelings well that's not something you read about every day or at least not that I have seen. I also enjoy the fact that it went more into his backstory and the Wyvern was a nice touch of him trying to show care for something as a substitute for how he wants to feel. (Or that's just how I read it I could be wrong.) And I'm glad he figured out who was his actual family and not those who were just using him. 
I did enjoy the fact he actually got so jealous he did not even question the fact that we would try and go behind his back. (albeit I literally followed him for the entire route.) Blinded by it only to find out because of his arrogance one of the people he cares about most will be killed. I am also glad he came to terms with his own name and was able to see it differently. I can't wait to see how they get into even more trouble as this appears to be the route with most action. 

Dallan's Route: An overworking good boy... I will not lie I see this commonly in a lot of works. (Though he also gives off the vibes of a leader who just doesn't know how to lead yet.) It's not like I dislike the character but to say he was my favorite would be a lie. I enjoy the character arc he goes through where he learns to relax and live a little. Albeit in the future, I hope he learns some better time management skills and how to delegate. (Albeit I understand the feeling of wanting to put all the burden on yourself and hope he also learns to overcome that.)  At the same time,  I can see this going in the direction where he does not feel like he needs to be in charge anymore and might give it up not caring for what people besides the ones closest to him think. (I was torn a bit on which felt more fitting but guess I will have to wait and see.) 
I did enjoy the fact he was blind it was a nice twist with many hints throughout the story I hope this does get touched more and not just thrown to the wayside.
Another thing I liked was that we got to interact and spend time with Chelsei just about every day. Seeing their antics and helping out with their gadgets was fun I am looking forward to seeing more of their inventions and how they ever A: cause problems or B: help out in the future.

Aiden's route:
I went into this expecting hell to break loose Especially after Tate's route which brought up a witch hunt (Which I also kinda expected to happen in Dallan's route when it didn't.) and that apparently he has a lot of exes... None of this was touched. I say out of all the routes this one seemed the most casual. Not to say that it was a bad thing I think having one that was a bit calmer might have been nice. However, it seemed to be the one with the least amount of world-building and character progression. I was surprised to find out the new headmaster was his father and I really want to send that fucker to the moon. but I did not see a lot of the stuff that was brought up in other routes overwise. I did enjoy the literal Doupleganger thing thought it was cool but it seemed like not much was actually done with it besides answering a few small contrivances definitely more could be done with that. ((Then again this is the one I saw in the comments that this one was apparently getting a remake so it might just be this is the first one.)) But ya out of all of them, this feels the most lackluster and least deserved of the routes. 

Gripes:
(Don't take these to heart they are primarily just gripes and can be ignored if desired)
So many characters were introduced and albeit some of them were touched more than others. I still feel like there was a bit of tunnel vision on the Romancable characters. (Albeit this is common in most VN's like this so I don't honestly have room to gripe.)
I am hoping in future chapters we get to learn more about the other characters, especially after so many were introduced but barely touched.
Another thing seems to be continuity between timelines Some things seem to show and other things just don't.  first off in Tate's route the headmaster basically tells Tate that he would be in charge of detention. This never happens in any of the other timelines as in one you end up going to detention and in the other, you see how horrible Tate is to Dallan.  now this could be Mr rape creep just trying to be intimidating a bluff. But then there is the entire witch hunt that doesn't happen in any of the other routes... Ok, maybe it was just there as a throwaway plot point and world-building... So does Tate just end up giving up on the egg or miss it hatching in the other routes and like Wyvern leaves? (Also how is it I literally could only pull these things from the latest chapter.)

Predictions:(Just some ideas on what's to come could be completely wrong.)
4th route looks like it will be revolving around summoner.
Mr Lust mysterious Therium seems to be the one for that...
Albeit It could also be a character we have not met yet
Perhaps it's the mysterious shard leader of the summoner who might be the real master of Jerry/Unkown and they know about Scribbles...
I mean seeing as so far it seems like summoners can call upon Nightfallen but not being real how far would it be to assume one has the power to make an actual nightfallen revived from a crystal. (I will prob figure out who the master is in the bad route if I accept the damned invite but one can guess and hey it's always good to put thoughts down before experiencing something.)

2nd Chapter:

Well, It will be revolved around the test...
I get the feeling we will be paired up with whoever we romance in chapter 1.
If not then all for the better Like I put in my Gripes seeing other characters and learning more about what makes them tick would be nice.
Plus a bit of a workaround I mean you spent all that time trying to get close to someone only for you to get teamed with someone else that you barely know or at least barely know in that route. Albeit are character so far seems uh a bit wishy-washy I guess he could be somewhat displeased about getting teamed up with someone he did not desire. (Ya this idea just breaks apart the more I think about it.)

Notes:
I Look forward to looking for the bad endings and seeing if they add anything to the story.
Albeit get the feeling it just makes all the obvious bad choices/Sex Options. Albeit I don't feel as if they will add anything to the plot besides oh you just didn't try hard enough or outright the person rejects you for being a horn dog who can't decide.
Otherwise, I look forward to more in the future the world you have built is interesting with some interesting gimmicks and characters though a bit more of an in-place magic system would be cool.

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Played this VN. I think this is the first VN that I fell in love with the protagonist, Cody. He's really amazing and goofy character. Half of his lines managed to get me chuckle.

Can't wait to see the next chapter!

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Did Scribbles lie in Dallan's route? 





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After the threesome with Chelsea Scribbles tells Cody he got bored/fell asleep bc it was so boring/pedestrian for someone like him, but then "writes in his diary" that it was the best sex he's ever had. Is it a plothole? or is it foreshadowing that Scribbles can and does lie all the time?

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Waffle :p

Pancake >:D

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3 OR 4 Months To Go Bruh :/

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I would rather wait 3-4 months for a full route and the quality of the story, don't rush art.

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Mind. Fucking. Blown. Hands down, my new favorite visual novel. At first I thought this was just another cheesy dating simulator BUT NO! This has some of the most fun and creative story building I've seen in a while. 10/10, recommending this masterpiece to all my friends. Don't overwork yourself, I hope to see you continue this project in the near future.

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Thank you for making an amazing game and I hope to see more updates in the future honestly this visual novel is a work of art it's the best one I've ever known good job

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Is there any way to get the NSFW tate gallery on page 5? I have been trying to find other ways yet I can't seemed to get it.. I litteraly need help...

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that's the "Ollie breaks your ass" page. you gotta let him break your ass instead of fucking his brains out. which btw its so endearing how excited he gets to top even tho he seems like the stereotypical bottom. 

10/10 he really is best boy

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Hi, I firstly want to start off by saying how truly wonderful this Visual Novel was to read. I spent almost 12 hours straight just reading through the 3 paths. I've been sick, so it was a great distraction from that. I absolutely loved it, and I have a few quick questions I'd like to ask. If they're things you don't wish to reveal or simply don't have an answer for yet, I totally get it. I also apologize if you've been asked these questions before.

1: Will each ending of the paths have continuations, or only the good/neutral? The bad/worst endings didn't really seem to have much of an opportunity to fix things in later chapters. I also can't imagine how much work it would be to have the paths diverging that much.

2: I noticed my playtime for Tate's path alone was slightly more than both Aiden and Dallan combined (not that I'm complaining. I like long stories). I think the best way I can describe it is that Tate's path felt like its own standalone novel. The other paths were great, but are there plans to maybe expand them a bit to be more in line with the quality of Tate's? I feel like Aiden's route could use a face-lift the most. I am very intrigued by his character and very much desire more.

3: Why the fuck is Oliver so cute? Like, I thought I had a thing for the small, shy type before, but Oliver easily takes the cake. For real though, I'm amazed at just how much the side characters shine and stand on their own in this VN. It makes the world feel a lot more alive to have them more present instead of just being plot devices. I guess this one was less a question and more just some praise.

I genuinely want to thank you for creating this VN. It genuinely might be the best one I've read yet. Absolute 11/10!

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Hey there, I'm happy you enjoyed it so much! No better medicine than some nice smut with plot :3

Yes, the paths will continue from the best outcome, and most importantly all of them will contain spoilers from all the routes in chapter one, so good thing you're up to date :]

Tate's story was easy to write for some reason, but he still has a lot of development to go through in the next chapter. Aiden will absolutely get a rework, there are many things I don't like about it and yes, it is too short. Dallan will also get a bit more content but nothing major. Ultimately Tate's route will remain the longest one of the bunch, even counting the last route, but not by a landslide.

I love designing side characters so I can feed the reader all the spicy content without actually rushing in with the love interests. Oliver is definitely one of the best bois out there. :) A surprising amount of people are either kind of indifferent towards him or absolutely adore him, but nobody can hate that adorable anxiety ball.

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Bro I Read Novels in 20 Hours a Day and Only Have 4 Hours of Sleep Waiting For Updates Like Hell And That's Just Hard Man, But Can't Help it It's Just The Stories and Art Is Sooo Good Well Can't Really Do Anything since I'm a Shut In

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Is there a guide for the nsfw cg for Aiden and Dallan's routes?

I absolutely love this game

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So I far I finished the game twice, first time the best ending, second time the bad ending, both in the Tate route. The best ending really was, "the best" ending, everyone was happy and that's it, nothing else to point out. But the bad ending, even though the player doesn't die, if I was in the place of the main character, I'd rather death over the ending. Tate might have even said "cat got your tongue?" Or something like that, and yeah, you did Tate. I'm Sorry 

good news! try going for the bad ending and then changing course at the ferris wheel! 

Great writing, a lot of funny moments and likeable characters! Can't wait for more updates. 

Question.... Just how large is the arena? I suspect that its large enough to hold atleast a 100 or more atleast.

I'm guessing at LEAST 175 people could fit in the stands, probably way more cuz of magic or something. There are probably quite a LOT of people we haven't met in the school (we never meet them, they're stuck in the mysterious fourth route that isnt out, ect), but there are probably a LOT of people.

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The arena is like a smaller colosseum, so it fits around 5000-6000 people.

SMALL?! SHIT! TO ME IT SOUND FUCKING LARGE!

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amazing!

played the tate route and loved it, cant wait for the next chapter


the main character has a lot of personality, it was a lil hard for me at first to put myself in his shoes cuz of his very subby very bottomy verbalized fantasies (which reminded me of a couple of my partners haha xP) but aside from that was great

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Loving the game, can’t wait for more Tate the most!

Question tho, since there is multiple endings, which one would be continued off for Chapter 2?

Will you at some point be making 100% guides for every route? I remember seeing one for Tate, but no one else. If not, I totally understand! However, it would certainly be helpful ^-^

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So, I've just finished all 3 routes... Am in LOVE with all 3 Characters, a little more with Tate on a personal level, but Aiden and Dallan have their spot on my List as well. I just cant wait for future updates for this VN, only a couple other furry novels managed to capture my emotions like that and made me think a lot... in a good way! also tear up a little...

But my gamer brain also wants to unlock aaaaall the scenes... and i just cant wrap my head around how to get the last two NSFW scenes on Dallan's route. If anyone could give me some insight on that it'd be very much appreciated.

Other than that, thank you for giving us such a sweet story dear Developer. i'll be waiting for a new update patiently however long it's gonna take <3

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Glad you liked my boys :3 

For Dallan's last scene you're gonna want to spend as much time with Chelsie as possible BUT make sure to go to detention with Dallan, the scenes will come up soon after Chelsie's nsfw scene.

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Thank you SO much, now i've seen everything this novel has to offer! and that last scene... yeah it was worth it x3

I repeat myself a lot, but i'll say it again. Cant wait for future updates good sir! :3

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Love Dallan!!!(づ ̄ 3 ̄)づ

please tell me theres a full guide 


i managed to 100% aiden but all i got from dallen was straight stuff and tate has like 4 uncomplete pages

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So i was thinking about something and i now have a question?

If you don’t scam Coal,

Learn teleportation canceling magic,

Save Tate from being fucked by a n.f. plant,

And win against Dallan and Aiden,

But also

Sucked Connor’s dick,

Spend a lot of time with Oliver,

And had a gangbang with a n.f. tribe,

Would you still get a good ending even though you were a MASSIVE SLUT?

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Spending time with Oliver or Merina can still get you the neutral ending, but not the best ending.
Acting like a slut while also being as faithful as you can to Tate will let you have the best ending :)

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Well getting anything than bad ending is already the best ending.

And also yeah that is actually true sex is not really important as much as just spending more time with Tate and helping with stuff.

Thx for answering and have fun with making chp2.

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That was me. I never want to get the bad or worst endings again. The worst ending for Tate's route just shook me up and left me crying for about 2 hours rambling on about how it all broke my heart. Always going for the best stuff; keep it up, this vn is the best one I've ever used... AND I LOVE CODY!! >:3

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Yes. That gets you the best ending.

Just for curiosity, there will be a translation to spanish or other languages more later on?

Unfortunately that is not up to me, but if other languages do appear I'll make sure to make a post bout it :]

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TL;DR: GREAT VN which makes me paranoid about it being dropped in a few years if the author gets burnt out because it seems like such a huge premise and has a ton of work involved just for the first chapter

This VN concerns me because it seems like it has the potential for a vast world with a ton of interesting characters that can make for a lengthy story  (that would make a good written book as well) which is great because so far it's amazing and I'm fully sucked into the world, but I've seen so many "deep/long" VNs stall for years (2 come to mind that I won't name) or get cancelled or the creators get burnt out after years of writing/drawing and I'm wary about getting invested BECAUSE the first chapter was so good...i'd be fully willing to pay for the completed version of this w/e it's done however long it takes but I don't want it to be dropped, I'm just paranoid i'll be story blue balled by another great VN ;-; Not even in it for the nsfw parts since i'm ace but the story/chars have me fully invested and I hope there's lots more to come cuz this has the potential to be my new fav of all time.

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No worries dear fan! Even if the project is delayed at some point, for one reason or another, rest assured that I will rise from my grave to finish it >:3

I do hope it doesn't take too long to finish it, since I already have ideas for other games I wanna try to make. But even if it does, updates should still come at a regular pace, aka: No yearly updates

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Finally i finished all the routes!!! THIS GAME IS SO GOOOOD!!! hope for the chapter 2

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Played every route and I loved every second of each of them. Though, I was wondering if there's a terrible/bad ending for Dallan's route? Since the other two had one. 

SPOILER!:







I've tried doing all the opposite (at least I believe so) of the "good" options and got the ending of Cody being set aside of heart for Dallan's route. Is this the "bad ending" or is there an even worser ending that's available for Dallan. If so, I'd really want to see it. 

Love the game, can't wait for ch2 and further routes. <3

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Glad you enjoyed it :3
Both Aiden and Dallan have 3 endings, the only way to get Dallan's worst ending is to choose the worst option when talking with Chelsie about her Nightfallen business. I believe the choice is something like "Walk out disgusted".

OH! TYSM!! I got it.

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I really made an account just to leave a comment, I really fuckin enjoyed tates route and i need me some more tate in my life aaaaaaaa hes fucking adorable

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What update this time? O.o

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just some quality of life, no worries, major updates will always be made into a devlog :]

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The amount of heart put into this is massive and it really shows! Such a well-written VN; a great balance of comedy, romance, and a beautiful world to go along with it. Thank you for all of your hard work!

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Absolutely love what you're making, dude! Keep up the fantastic work :)

When you choose to talk to no one scribbles says that Tate's route is incomplete when it is complete for chapter 1

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Thank you, I am aware

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Can someone please tell me what that song is when Tate is laying in the Daisy Feild. because it really gets to me and I like the song so if anyone knows the name of it please tell me

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I believe the one you're talking about is "Your foundation" by Sporadic Rat :)

Unfortunately I don't think you'll find it anywhere since it's an original song and the ost is not out yet.

wait a minute then how did you get it

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It's a song specifically made for Lust Shards

Ok

When will the OST come out?

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When there are enough songs to make a playlist, I assume that will be after the next update.

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Did I already write a review for this without completing at least one path, yes. Is it currently 4am because this vn has kept me up, yes. I am ABSOLUTELY HOOKED, this vn is hilarious and the music fits everything perfectly. Not only that the art style is fantastic. I'm on tates path because yes, and I am super engrossed in the story. Not to mention Tate is my ideal type anyway. But yeah just a comment on the appreciation of this masterpiece of a vn. I am genuinely super stoked for any feature updates and projects. I obviously don't have much feedback yet but I am willing to give all to potentially help improve the experience for others!

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