To be honest I downloaded this VN on a whim thinking that it would be a decent way to kill a few hours' worth of boredom. Because of this I initially didn't have any real expectations for this VN in terms of its quality and content. I have to say that having played all that is available I now can't believe that I was so quick to dismiss this VN. I'm not saying that it is perfect, or that it has no room for improvement, but I truly believe that this VN is one that has immense potential. I look forward to seeing how it grows and evolves in the future and I wish the creator(s) all possible luck in this process.
I congratulate you on the work you are doing, I can not imagine how difficult it is to do it all by yourself, the characters you have brought to life in your visual novel are fantastic, I will continue to follow this beautiful work, I can not wait for the next one to come out update.
I'd first like to say that I love the majority of this vn. From it's unique twist of the protag somehow holding (possibly the long lost demon lord) within their body. Or the meta commentary from the other characters when you try to go through a unfinished route.
But I have to say that the sheer amount of monologuing from the protag after the dream sequence is seriously annoying. Like if you cut out the entire thing and said " I'm going to an elite school for magical hunters because I caused my classroom to blow up" would have just covered it.
Plus any interaction with the protag's sister just feels overall pointless. I would just cut out most of the morning sequence and just leave the dream part and the "protag looks at the bathroom mirror" part. Then have the protag's mom have a tearful goodbye with the protag.
The main reason for why the monologue is annoying is because it feels like the protag is just breaking the fourth wall just to be condescending towards the reader.
But aside from the prologue, everything starting from the first interaction with tates introduction is great!
i gotta say i really enjoyed this game it was so much fun and it has such an interesting story to it and i cant wait for more i think my fav scene was the guitar scene it was so well written and it sounded so beautifully and loved it and i honestly wanna say i really hope to see more from this game again soon and to please keep up the amazing work you def have my support and lol when we were first introduced to the headmaster i was lowkey hoping we did get to have some lewd time with him and i lowkey hope we can do it again tbh cuz he is such a DILF lmao and id love to see some more for him if its possible~ and i cant say which of the characters i like the most even the side characters are really cool i love how inclusive you were with including a character that identifies with they/them their design is really cool and interesting plz keep up the great work and cant wait to see more when it becomes available to play the other routes and continue with the current one and hopefully get some fun with the side characters as well too if possible lol!
Tbh i wasnt really expecting that much from this vn because of where i found it (i will plead the fifth here even tho i'm not american xD), but damm i really like this, even tho it's not the whole vn and only one route of the first chapter i still have to say that this one is pretty good, i mean it's not perfection and not the best written thing i've ever seen, but i really enjoyed it and the plot from the tiger route is very nice, really liked the idea and how it was executed, well done for sure, also the art is super good, love the art style and love the lion daddy scene owo, will be sure to support your patreon when i have the chance. Btw don't worry about a few spelling mistakes, english is not easy and the game is pretty readable, very poggies
Okay! It reminds me of some of the books I read about the same kind of life. Horny furries trying to get the MC laid, MC being the most “attractive” character, etc. Anyway…
For a first chapter, it does pack a lot of content. I have to say that Aiden’s route is touching. I got the perfect route. (Always loyal to the one I pick, no side stuff, no getting laid by others, etc.) I love how well build is the little bubble the academy has. It is enough to work the story. About misspelling… little here… little there… but does not distract. I can tolerate it.
The day progression is slow, and I enjoy that the days are longer and not faster. The speed of which both MC and Aiden fall for each other is reasonable. There is more personal connection is not rushed like in many VN’s. But it is true that the days are only 3 according to that they are going a little too fast, but I can get pass that.
Aiden is an interesting character and to tell the truth. It bought a smile on me when MC accepted Aiden even if he had “double personality”. He accepts him the way he is. (Besides the benefits we discover after knowing about that “double personality”. Some people will know what I’m talking about.)
Overall: It’s pretty good! I do recommend giving it a try.
i love love LOVE this game omg!!! there were a couple of spelling errors, which is completely forgivable in light of the recentness of this build and the fantastic energy you give all the characters! haven't been this into a VN in awhile, rlly looking forward to future updates!! ;w;
Awesome VN! I love the vibe and energy of this one. The characters are all interesting in their own way. The world and universe is great and built up very well. I feel like I know my place in the story well but it hasn't been narrated to me ad nauseam. Very well written.
And the art is super good. Decent amount of scenes and CGs. More than i expected for just a single chapter. You can feel the work and energy put into this one. Keep it up! I can't wait to see this one grow!
I really like this game so far, and not just for the sake of horny.
For one, I actually think the lack of periods in dialogue works surprisingly well, though I don't know how intentional it is.
The main thing, though, is how... shameless things are. Aiden's anger/horny issues are a good example; I love seeing a character wear their joys and desires on their sleeve, without feeling like they're putting on an act.
It sorta feels like it celebrates sexuality in and of itself, I guess you could say? And even most adult games don't actually do that.
Never have I ever experienced such an amazing story, it has the perfect ballence of everything that I love in a game like this, a good narrative, awesome sexy characters with diverse personalities and a very interesting yet lewd world, I honestly CANNOT wait until the next chapter ^w^
I really enjoyed what you have so far. The Characters are really fun and can't wait to get to know them more as you go through the rest of the story. I Really enjoyed Aiden's story so far . If you plan on having more routes later then I cant wait to start romancing the other guys hopefully that will include the Headmaster lol he's really hot and I think a route for him would be a whirlwind lol. Thank you for an amazing start to this story!
I love the art and the plot so far is interesting enough, but there's a lot of typos and grammatical errors that ruin the experience a bit. The writing is okay, and i love the humor. I still enjoyed it though and waiting so bad for Aiden's dick(s) and Dallan's route!
My first play on this, It was fun, I thought you couldn't have sex and form a bond with the headmaster, but I'm very happy you can. I wonder if more fine-looking dudes are coming, I love to meet them if they're as hot as the lion daddy. I got a severe vibe of Happy Potter when he set the rules. I hope you have relationship buildings in the future and explore outside. That twist at the end was unexpected; now we know why Aiden had daddy issues.
Great start. Fun characters, funny dialogue and banter, great art. Looking forward to MC getting his ass destroyed by the nightfallen and Aiden. Literally the only thing that could improve what's already here for me is if the characters had animal dicks, but that's just personal preference.
I only progressed a bit to the quote-unquote "practice" section and so far I will be brutally honest in my opinion it's on par with Repeat my favourite Visual Novel, please keep up this greatly written novel. I have huge fun lording all the akward situations over Scribbles. I love tearing down the walls of beings with MASSIVE egos.
Edit: I have finished chapter 1 and my opinion has not changed, a nice light story, nothing too heavy unlike Repeat but just enough intrigue to keep me on the edge of my seat. I look forward to chapter 2 and on and the other routes.
I enjoyed the first build quite a bit! I can't wait for what you have next in store (that meaning next chapters/routes).
You've got a great main characters' dynamics and the story is enjoyable as well! I've found some spelling mistakes, but it wasn't anything severe that made me lose the sense of the sentence.
This VN is absolutely amazing! It has a perfect balance of humor, wholesomeness and horni. I'd even say that this might be one of my 3 favorite VNs of all time that share the same #1 spot. i can't wait to see how this game will go in the future and i hope there won't be any problems in development. I also have a few questions:
1) What is the current update schedule? Every few weeks, a month or multiple months?
2) Will there be TBS fighting mechanics while in a battle against the nigthfallen?
3) Who is the next character in line to get a path? I hope it's Tate hehe ;3
hi there, being in top 3 in someone's list is always great ^^
As for your questions:
1. I'm working on this vn alone so it really depends on how fast I compose the script and make the art, but it should receive an update at least once every 2-3 months as long as the support continues here or on Patreon.
2. Not very likely, it's not a bad idea, and if it turns out to be easier to make than it seems, then maybe, and I mean a BIG maybe.
3. I can't say who will be next, but on my Patreon there is a poll that ends in a couple of days to vote on the next path, if you want to give Tate a better chance, consider voting there ;)
your game is awesome, humor, emotion and characters with a really nice personality (and design) I loved it and I'm really in a hurry to find my little tiger ❤
The art style is very fitting, while its desirable to let he player input a name, I like there to also be a default name to fallback on, we get to have a full but incomplete view of the MC, that makes me VERY happy! Now I know exactly what to envision the MC looking like! Not just a feline, but a Snep! Yay! Any feline would do fur me, but Snep is new! ^^ oh! Would love to see that 2 months ago photo or well the "true" looks, not sure which, heh ^^;,
He doesn't like fish??? Blasphemy!!! XD
Metajokes! XD and a beautiful compromise! In just the fashion I like it!
WWoof!
That was killer, mood, introduction, but priceless! Just how I like it! ^^
Pfff! hahaha too bad the CG is only Chibi, but its also perfect like it to! XD One idea is if you ever make a non chibi version, can show both!
Is this end of meet choice for rest of VN or just CH1? I feel its too soon to lock in a route, we have only just met them. We have a good gasp by now of some of their personalities and quirks, but what we know is still all superficial. I would rather have the chance to know more about each of them, an example or taste of what they have to offer, like some of their simple hopes, dreams, thoughts, etc. Once locked in then delve into more deep and personal ones.
Either way that a cleaver meta redirect! I'll come back for you handsome! I got another one to chase! Oh and will Shard choice and Relationship Route be independent? Would allow for some more flexibility, would only need slight edits and a few bigger ones compared to a pure combo.
Yeah that feels really wrong, to have it stated that the choice was made long ago, predetermined, thus set in stone against ANY forces, yet the player gets to choose it based on a arbitrary choice of crush, before even getting to know ANY of them better? It doesn't compute properly. It is cute, but this seems way too rushed as hell!!!
Ung... family name too? This really ought to be done for us, as it stands to be much winder ranged and open than a first name...
Oh wow that was an excellent choice of song!
I would like to know what that new kitty looks like!
That ending wow! I'd ask more questions but here is not the place, for major spoiler.
Damn.. once again I'm going to have to choose between them! D:, I want them all!... so I guess multiple save files then? hehehe...
Big issue though to keep mention Humans and Humanity when none of the characters are even Human, let alone all Human. Will need to change this descriptor!
In all cases review what I have said and judge as you see fit on their level of merit against how much effort/work would be involved for suggested changes. I would not say anything has really happened that breaks the logic flow established, and for that reason things don't have to be changed.
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To be honest I downloaded this VN on a whim thinking that it would be a decent way to kill a few hours' worth of boredom. Because of this I initially didn't have any real expectations for this VN in terms of its quality and content. I have to say that having played all that is available I now can't believe that I was so quick to dismiss this VN. I'm not saying that it is perfect, or that it has no room for improvement, but I truly believe that this VN is one that has immense potential. I look forward to seeing how it grows and evolves in the future and I wish the creator(s) all possible luck in this process.
I congratulate you on the work you are doing, I can not imagine how difficult it is to do it all by yourself, the characters you have brought to life in your visual novel are fantastic, I will continue to follow this beautiful work, I can not wait for the next one to come out update.
Here is a biscuit for you, you deserve it
ʕっ•ᴥ•ʔっ 🍪 <3
I'd first like to say that I love the majority of this vn. From it's unique twist of the protag somehow holding (possibly the long lost demon lord) within their body. Or the meta commentary from the other characters when you try to go through a unfinished route.
But I have to say that the sheer amount of monologuing from the protag after the dream sequence is seriously annoying. Like if you cut out the entire thing and said " I'm going to an elite school for magical hunters because I caused my classroom to blow up" would have just covered it.
Plus any interaction with the protag's sister just feels overall pointless. I would just cut out most of the morning sequence and just leave the dream part and the "protag looks at the bathroom mirror" part. Then have the protag's mom have a tearful goodbye with the protag.
The main reason for why the monologue is annoying is because it feels like the protag is just breaking the fourth wall just to be condescending towards the reader.
But aside from the prologue, everything starting from the first interaction with tates introduction is great!
Tldr: cut down on the monologuing in the prologue
I'm downloading this ironically I swear
I hope you'll also be ironically waiting for future updates, and ironically fall in love with all the characters ^^
i gotta say i really enjoyed this game it was so much fun and it has such an interesting story to it and i cant wait for more i think my fav scene was the guitar scene it was so well written and it sounded so beautifully and loved it and i honestly wanna say i really hope to see more from this game again soon and to please keep up the amazing work you def have my support and lol when we were first introduced to the headmaster i was lowkey hoping we did get to have some lewd time with him and i lowkey hope we can do it again tbh cuz he is such a DILF lmao and id love to see some more for him if its possible~ and i cant say which of the characters i like the most even the side characters are really cool i love how inclusive you were with including a character that identifies with they/them their design is really cool and interesting plz keep up the great work and cant wait to see more when it becomes available to play the other routes and continue with the current one and hopefully get some fun with the side characters as well too if possible lol!
Tbh i wasnt really expecting that much from this vn because of where i found it (i will plead the fifth here even tho i'm not american xD), but damm i really like this, even tho it's not the whole vn and only one route of the first chapter i still have to say that this one is pretty good, i mean it's not perfection and not the best written thing i've ever seen, but i really enjoyed it and the plot from the tiger route is very nice, really liked the idea and how it was executed, well done for sure, also the art is super good, love the art style and love the lion daddy scene owo, will be sure to support your patreon when i have the chance. Btw don't worry about a few spelling mistakes, english is not easy and the game is pretty readable, very poggies
Okay! It reminds me of some of the books I read about the same kind of life. Horny furries trying to get the MC laid, MC being the most “attractive” character, etc. Anyway…
For a first chapter, it does pack a lot of content. I have to say that Aiden’s route is touching. I got the perfect route. (Always loyal to the one I pick, no side stuff, no getting laid by others, etc.) I love how well build is the little bubble the academy has. It is enough to work the story. About misspelling… little here… little there… but does not distract. I can tolerate it.
The day progression is slow, and I enjoy that the days are longer and not faster. The speed of which both MC and Aiden fall for each other is reasonable. There is more personal connection is not rushed like in many VN’s. But it is true that the days are only 3 according to that they are going a little too fast, but I can get pass that.
Aiden is an interesting character and to tell the truth. It bought a smile on me when MC accepted Aiden even if he had “double personality”. He accepts him the way he is. (Besides the benefits we discover after knowing about that “double personality”. Some people will know what I’m talking about.)
Overall: It’s pretty good! I do recommend giving it a try.
i love love LOVE this game omg!!! there were a couple of spelling errors, which is completely forgivable in light of the recentness of this build and the fantastic energy you give all the characters! haven't been this into a VN in awhile, rlly looking forward to future updates!! ;w;
I like Tate so much omg
Can't blame you, he is irresistible :>
Awesome VN! I love the vibe and energy of this one. The characters are all interesting in their own way. The world and universe is great and built up very well. I feel like I know my place in the story well but it hasn't been narrated to me ad nauseam. Very well written.
And the art is super good. Decent amount of scenes and CGs. More than i expected for just a single chapter. You can feel the work and energy put into this one. Keep it up! I can't wait to see this one grow!
I really like this game so far, and not just for the sake of horny.
For one, I actually think the lack of periods in dialogue works surprisingly well, though I don't know how intentional it is.
The main thing, though, is how... shameless things are. Aiden's anger/horny issues are a good example; I love seeing a character wear their joys and desires on their sleeve, without feeling like they're putting on an act.
It sorta feels like it celebrates sexuality in and of itself, I guess you could say? And even most adult games don't actually do that.
Never have I ever experienced such an amazing story, it has the perfect ballence of everything that I love in a game like this, a good narrative, awesome sexy characters with diverse personalities and a very interesting yet lewd world, I honestly CANNOT wait until the next chapter ^w^
this was amazing, exceeded my expectations and am eagerly waiting for the next chapter
this game somehow likes harry porter but way more horny and furry
This VN is Amazing! A few spelling mistakes but was still really enjoyable! I look forward to future updates!
This VN is Marvelous I love it can't wait for more updates.
WoW, your VN is amazing
im really liking this so im really look forward to this next update and story as well as more art
I really enjoyed what you have so far. The Characters are really fun and can't wait to get to know them more as you go through the rest of the story. I Really enjoyed Aiden's story so far . If you plan on having more routes later then I cant wait to start romancing the other guys hopefully that will include the Headmaster lol he's really hot and I think a route for him would be a whirlwind lol. Thank you for an amazing start to this story!
Very enjoyable read! I love MC's silly monolgue and looking forward for more to come.
I love the art and the plot so far is interesting enough, but there's a lot of typos and grammatical errors that ruin the experience a bit. The writing is okay, and i love the humor. I still enjoyed it though and waiting so bad for Aiden's dick(s) and Dallan's route!
Amazing so far. I am really looking forward to the full version
Dallan need belly rubs
Your vn is amazing
My first play on this, It was fun, I thought you couldn't have sex and form a bond with the headmaster, but I'm very happy you can. I wonder if more fine-looking dudes are coming, I love to meet them if they're as hot as the lion daddy. I got a severe vibe of Happy Potter when he set the rules. I hope you have relationship buildings in the future and explore outside. That twist at the end was unexpected; now we know why Aiden had daddy issues.
Wow, that is a lot more content than I expected! Wonderful job!
Great start. Fun characters, funny dialogue and banter, great art. Looking forward to MC getting his ass destroyed by the nightfallen and Aiden. Literally the only thing that could improve what's already here for me is if the characters had animal dicks, but that's just personal preference.
I only progressed a bit to the quote-unquote "practice" section and so far I will be brutally honest in my opinion it's on par with Repeat my favourite Visual Novel, please keep up this greatly written novel. I have huge fun lording all the akward situations over Scribbles. I love tearing down the walls of beings with MASSIVE egos.
Edit: I have finished chapter 1 and my opinion has not changed, a nice light story, nothing too heavy unlike Repeat but just enough intrigue to keep me on the edge of my seat. I look forward to chapter 2 and on and the other routes.
just looking at the art ,its straight fire
just the art alone makes me wanna read this
EVERYTHING about Lust Shards is Incredible! \>o</ a real masterpiece in the making~! :P amazing work all 'round! :D
Dallan is best boi~ n///n
Aiden and Dallan are my favorite. The MC may be awkward but he’s cute and good looking snow leopard. I can see why the boys are attracted to him.
Can't wait to see more Aiden and check out Dallan's route
I enjoyed the first build quite a bit! I can't wait for what you have next in store (that meaning next chapters/routes).
You've got a great main characters' dynamics and the story is enjoyable as well! I've found some spelling mistakes, but it wasn't anything severe that made me lose the sense of the sentence.
Thank you for this ^^
Everything in this game is awesome. I liked it a lot and hope to see more
This VN is absolutely amazing! It has a perfect balance of humor, wholesomeness and horni. I'd even say that this might be one of my 3 favorite VNs of all time that share the same #1 spot. i can't wait to see how this game will go in the future and i hope there won't be any problems in development. I also have a few questions:
1) What is the current update schedule? Every few weeks, a month or multiple months?
2) Will there be TBS fighting mechanics while in a battle against the nigthfallen?
3) Who is the next character in line to get a path? I hope it's Tate hehe ;3
hi there, being in top 3 in someone's list is always great ^^
As for your questions:
1. I'm working on this vn alone so it really depends on how fast I compose the script and make the art, but it should receive an update at least once every 2-3 months as long as the support continues here or on Patreon.
2. Not very likely, it's not a bad idea, and if it turns out to be easier to make than it seems, then maybe, and I mean a BIG maybe.
3. I can't say who will be next, but on my Patreon there is a poll that ends in a couple of days to vote on the next path, if you want to give Tate a better chance, consider voting there ;)
Im now in love with this Vn cant wait for the updates :D
your game is awesome, humor, emotion and characters with a really nice personality (and design) I loved it and I'm really in a hurry to find my little tiger ❤
Wow I really love this vn I'm excited for next update
The art style is very fitting, while its desirable to let he player input a name, I like there to also be a default name to fallback on, we get to have a full but incomplete view of the MC, that makes me VERY happy! Now I know exactly what to envision the MC looking like! Not just a feline, but a Snep! Yay! Any feline would do fur me, but Snep is new! ^^ oh! Would love to see that 2 months ago photo or well the "true" looks, not sure which, heh ^^;,
He doesn't like fish??? Blasphemy!!! XD
Metajokes! XD and a beautiful compromise! In just the fashion I like it!
WWoof!
That was killer, mood, introduction, but priceless! Just how I like it! ^^
Pfff! hahaha too bad the CG is only Chibi, but its also perfect like it to! XD One idea is if you ever make a non chibi version, can show both!
Is this end of meet choice for rest of VN or just CH1? I feel its too soon to lock in a route, we have only just met them. We have a good gasp by now of some of their personalities and quirks, but what we know is still all superficial. I would rather have the chance to know more about each of them, an example or taste of what they have to offer, like some of their simple hopes, dreams, thoughts, etc. Once locked in then delve into more deep and personal ones.
Either way that a cleaver meta redirect! I'll come back for you handsome! I got another one to chase! Oh and will Shard choice and Relationship Route be independent? Would allow for some more flexibility, would only need slight edits and a few bigger ones compared to a pure combo.
Yeah that feels really wrong, to have it stated that the choice was made long ago, predetermined, thus set in stone against ANY forces, yet the player gets to choose it based on a arbitrary choice of crush, before even getting to know ANY of them better? It doesn't compute properly. It is cute, but this seems way too rushed as hell!!!
Ung... family name too? This really ought to be done for us, as it stands to be much winder ranged and open than a first name...
Oh wow that was an excellent choice of song!
I would like to know what that new kitty looks like!
That ending wow! I'd ask more questions but here is not the place, for major spoiler.
Damn.. once again I'm going to have to choose between them! D:, I want them all!... so I guess multiple save files then? hehehe...
Big issue though to keep mention Humans and Humanity when none of the characters are even Human, let alone all Human. Will need to change this descriptor!
In all cases review what I have said and judge as you see fit on their level of merit against how much effort/work would be involved for suggested changes. I would not say anything has really happened that breaks the logic flow established, and for that reason things don't have to be changed.
IM SO EXCITED FOR THIS...lately so many good games has been given up/hiatus...i really hope this one doesnt have that same fate. im so interested.
This VN has massive potential, I hope it gets the backing it deserves and isn't abused.